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Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed [Report This]
Date: 10-13-13 - 09:48 am Title: Chapter 2

Wow you have so much going on here with just a chapter, I couldn't stop reading looking forward to seeing where you were going to take me. Good story, can't wait to read more later. A A

Author's Response: Thank you. I might be a little before I post again, I can't do it from my ipad and my computer died ...again! Ugh but anyway, thank you for the response it means a lot coming from a writer as talented as you are

Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed [Report This]
Date: 10-13-13 - 09:38 am Title: Chapter 1

I got a little free time, so I ran to read my Rolo. So happy I got to start reading this. Wonderful story and even though I'm outta time I'm gonna sneak in another chapter. (smile) A A

Reviewer: QTFic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-11-13 - 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 5

I am loving this story so far! I can see Kendall giving Scott the side-eye. I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm trying to make Kendall come across good natured as her mother but still have the wolverine temperament, I figured Scott would be the perfect person to show Kendall's aggressive side. Ad maybe she will give jean a hard time....maybe

Reviewer: Beautiful Storm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08-04-13 - 12:55 am Title: Chapter 5

Hahaha!!! Okay, that's just too good!!! Great job, Kendall!! Where's Sabretooth?

Reviewer: MadameVega Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-11-13 - 04:34 am Title: Chapter 1

Hello. Your story is very interesting and I am curious to see how it goes....a sugestion though if I could.

Watch your capitalization and punctuation. I am not trying to be a grammar Nazi(trust me) but it can make it really hard to read. Simply capitalization fixes like capitalizing everyone's first names in dialog "I'm pregnant, yes Logan is the father." not "Im pregnant yes logan is the father"....If you are a very young author maybe invest in a BETA, someone to proof read your work before you post it.

One author to another you do have talent you should put it to full use. Happy Writing! -Vega

Reviewer: Beautiful Storm Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-03-13 - 02:22 am Title: Chapter 4

Yes!!!!!! He's come in!! Fight time!!! Loving the story, but jean and Scott need to get over themselves.

Reviewer: punkin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07-02-13 - 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely love your new story.

Reviewer: Beautiful Storm Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-27-13 - 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

Lol! Go Rogue!!! At least she get it! Jean and Scott need to shut up and find out Logan's side.

Reviewer: Beautiful Storm Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-27-13 - 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 2

Ooooh, time for confessions!!

Reviewer: Beautiful Storm Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-24-13 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lol, loved Scott's confusion. Now where's the father to be off to? Is Sabretooth coming in?

Reviewer: Antiwa Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-19-13 - 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love your story and can't wait to read more. I glad Storm wasn't to upset with Logan could be he did explain why he had to leave in the first place. Great story.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I'm going to get a few more chapters going tomorrow.

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