[Report This]Date: 08-31-05 - 11:43 pm Title: Mating
dude, you write aLOT. anyway that was full of tension n good.
Author's Response: Won't be able to continue this speed for much longer....want to get atleast a couple of fics out of the way before that happens...lets see which ones get completed!!
[Report This]Date: 08-31-05 - 09:35 pm Title: Mating
you know, i can't say i didn''t like this chapter. i liked the flow and i liked the animal in him trying to get Ororo to accept him before they mated. *whew* glad it wasn't brutal.
[Report This]Date: 08-31-05 - 09:51 am Title: Unleashed
You really have to hurry and update this story. It's getting so good and I want them to hurry and breakout so they can kick everyones ass. Great job!
Author's Response: Breakout...so soon!! Still have a lot to write before I even think about that!!
[Report This]Date: 08-31-05 - 12:15 am Title: Unleashed
For lack of a better term, holy shit.....
Author's Response: Realy *holy*....stay tuned for the next update!!
[Report This]Date: 08-30-05 - 09:44 pm Title: Unleashed
Godmaned cliffhangers. i hate 'em. what a tease. lol
Author's Response: Cliffhangers....keep you coming back!! Will update soon.
[Report This]Date: 08-30-05 - 08:34 pm Title: Unleashed
Ummm...holy fuck.
Yep. That about sums it up.
I had no idea you had such a dark core, Bats. I'm liking it!!!
I love the story and I love the frequent updates!! Your talent grows with each chapter!! Honestly.
Author's Response: Everyone has darkness within them....I am exploring mine here. Although I am trying to balance it out with the ligtness of 'Secrets' and the family feeling of 'First Impressions'...and then there are 'Dreams'
[Report This]Date: 08-30-05 - 08:20 pm Title: Unleashed
Wow. I am truly loving this story. Another excellent chapter. Things are really moving along nicely now, and you're doing a great job with knitting "canon" into the storyline and capturing the essence of these characters. But that cliffhanger you left us with was just eeevil! I'll be waiting with bated breath for the next chapter, so please do update soon!
Author's Response: I love my cliffhangers....its clearly visible in any of my fics!! GLad u liked the 'orgin' comics tie in with the movieverse Logan
[Report This]Date: 08-30-05 - 07:22 pm Title: Unleashed
love the "dog" tie in
Author's Response: Thanks...I always wanted to use the specific *dog* part of 'origin'.
[Report This]Date: 08-30-05 - 07:18 pm Title: Unleashed
of course another inducing 'Wow' fic. And all I can say is wow, the plot line is exceptional, the sexual intensity is maddening, and the characterisations are on point to getting the dynamics of the story across. excellent addition, and now of course I am waiting for the next chapter, which I am preparing myself for.
Sincerely,
VB
Author's Response: Thanks for the review....I am currently focussing mainly on getting Survival and Secrets completed....although I am far from it!!
[Report This]Date: 08-29-05 - 11:42 pm Title: New Additions
Still oving it. Update soon!!!!
Author's Response: Will update it soon!! Thanks for liking it....
[Report This]Date: 08-29-05 - 07:56 pm Title: New Additions
Who's the Dead female? You have really put this fic together, the plot and the characters, Great Job. Can't wait for the next chapter, I wan't Wolvie to tear Wraith a new Asshole soon. Hint! Hint!
Author's Response: Tear a new one...huh. I have it all stored up. Wolvie is remembering everything!!
[Report This]Date: 08-29-05 - 07:13 pm Title: New Additions
I'm not usually into dark fics, but I am truly loving and enjoying this one. Just an all around great job on plot, characters, and everything in between. What will Mystique do now that her son is one of the captives? And whose the dead female mutant? More please! And soon! This story is too good to leave hanging for long. (And might I also put in plugs for updates on Dreams and First Impressions? *wink*)
Author's Response: A lot of questions? The dead mutant...next chapter. Mystique...well she is a mystery, even to me. I haven't decided. Will try and update it soon...along with the other two. Right now, going for a shower and then going to work on 'Secrets'.
[Report This]Date: 08-29-05 - 06:46 pm Title: New Additions
though i lvoe this story and i do, i think perhaps it's kinda progressing slow. i think it's all the double talk. but at the same time i like it. it's very confusing feeling. lol.
Author's Response: I know....I am deliberately slowing it down sometimes....to give the characters a breather. Maybe u feel like this cause I am keeping the chapters short. Don't worry, next chapter there will be jump....How does a week sound to you!!
[Report This]Date: 08-27-05 - 10:12 pm Title: So it begins….
Hurry and Update! So Cornelius need Viagra to get it up, and could the other mutant be jean? Great job, need longer chapters.
Author's Response: Well i didn't use the name....but u caught on just right...hey he's Oooolllddd....Thanks for the update!!
[Report This]Date: 08-27-05 - 09:08 pm Title: So it begins….
You must update this immediately! Or I will go on a hunt, for you! I must know what's going to happen to Storm, I have to know. I have to find out what's going on with the other mutants coming. Please, please, please update!
Author's Response: I will try and update today....have been busy with finishing the drabble sereis and carrying the story forward in FI and Secrets.....!!
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