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Reviewer: dudtheman Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05-23-12 - 11:00 pm Title: Embraced

sweet story =)

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Date: 03-16-07 - 07:29 pm Title: Embraced

Totally.

Once I find a way to get around this whole being heterosexual thing, I'm askin ya ta marry me. TOTALLY.

Reviewer: NemesisBecomin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-16-07 - 07:00 pm Title: Challenged

Dear Gods, I love your story. It's been too long since I've read it originally. Thank the heavens for you.

Reviewer: Slowly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-26-06 - 08:12 am Title: Embraced

Aw man. I was hoping there would be more. Great job, though. :)

Reviewer: Serena Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-20-06 - 10:17 pm Title: Embraced

Great story! Loved the slow building tension, the action/description and the interplay between the characters (especially RoLo).

Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-15-06 - 03:14 am Title: Embraced

Well Logan and Ororo have found each other and they both know they have connection that goes all the way to there souls.

Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-15-06 - 02:15 am Title: Confronted

All Logan wants to do is help Ororo how ever he can. And hope she will forgive him if he has hurt her.

Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-15-06 - 01:08 am Title: Challenged

Logan andOroro have a new type of relationship built on trust,respect and caring for each other. Will it grow in to something more?.

Reviewer: Lyger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-14-06 - 11:43 pm Title: Exposed

Logan knows Ororo is haveing trouble since the last mission. Maybe Ororo will let Logan help her if she wants help.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-08-05 - 10:56 am Title: Embraced

I actually teared up as I read the ending. This was such a beautiful story, just truly wonderful. I don't even have enough adjectives to describe it! Superb. Just very simple, very realistic, nothing overdone, all so believable and touching. Touching is a good description. I don't recall being touched by such a story or at least not in a great while and then they're usually death stories and one shots. Even the parts with Scott and Logan had a nice emotional feel to them, Logan's coming to terms with the boy leader who rather grows up and especially where they were working on the car together, perfect male bonding. Truthfully I don't think this story could get much better! Lovely job, Minarya! I'm glad you finally found your way to the Realm!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-08-05 - 10:51 am Title: Confronted

You write as if you know Storm intimately – all that makes her who she is. Things I never even thought of. Your writing style is so clear and natural. You bring out all the emotions vividly in everyone, poor Ororo's fear, Logan's anger at himself for possibly making her take on more than she could handle, his concern. Simply well done.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-08-05 - 10:41 am Title: Challenged

Oh my! This is so believable! I always wonder at what point does Logan start liking Ororo after being stuck on Jean throughout the first two movies so I really enjoyed this. You make it totally pausilbe. When he first became aware of his arousal for her when she tells him how she felt and still feels was just done so well. It was not only believable but I could almost feel the intensity and the sheer weight of her burden as I read. Now that's good writing!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-08-05 - 10:31 am Title: Exposed

This is beautiful. A wonderful start! So well written. It’s like you’ve put the comic Logan and Ororo into the movie which I really, really like. I just never liked the movie characters as much, they're less than what they should be, not enough umph!

Reviewer: Syrinx Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-07-05 - 06:18 pm Title: Embraced

Well, I'm in love. I've always been crazy about your stories, but that last section put a stupid grin on my face for at least fifteen minutes and thus it made my day. In fact, my fiance just told me the look on my face is "pure happiness." So thank you. :)

Reviewer: JamesGirl0512 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-04-05 - 09:32 am Title: Confronted

I know 'Ro's unconscious and all, but I get the distinct feeling there may be a little RoLo lovin' in the next chapter, but that could just be me. LOL. Your descriptions are beautiful. You give the reader everything they need to put themselves right there with the characters. Nicely done...as usual.

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