BTW. I liked this much better than the last chapter!! I love me some angst--even if I bitch about it. LOL.

Author's Response: I knew you would like it. Hope to have another one soon. Don't know how long this fic will last, but who knows!!

Well firstly for my interpretation of Logan or anyone else being comic-verse, well it's hard to see them as anything else. One gets too little from the movie-verse to actually see the truer characteristics of them; it’s just the tip of the iceberg. Secondly the quartet? You write them so well together; it’s that feeling of knowing your friends more then they know themselves. I really like the ending with the reveal of the “lover” for Jubilee, suits her very much. Thirdly, keep up the good work. Perhaps we may see more characters interact with the couple we all like. Kudos.

Author's Response: This is fromt he movieverse and as the movies don't give much background or description, I have had to improvise time and again. And Jubes' gotta have shopping.

Well written as always, but I liked it better darker and more focused on Logan and his inner demons. So a small request...less outside influence and more RoLo. I like the more mature versions of your stories as opposed to the three misfits (though useflu in their own way, I felt they detracted more than added to this). Of course, this is your story, and you have your own style, but since you seem to value my opinion, there you have it. More soon, I imagine?

Author's Response: I know.....but everything is working around just fine. This will not be a very long series.

I really enjoyed the conversation between Ro and Remy. It showed their closeness and how good they know/can read the other. So Remy doesn't like Logan, huh :) Somehow I got the feeling he's just trying to convince himself of that, while not really feeling that way. Ro and Marie have specials places in the lives and hearts of each man and none of the two like the idea of sharing. But as soon as they understand they are not rivals they'll get along. But let's see, maybe I'm completely wrong here, heh :)

Author's Response: Well, Remy is used to being the main man in Ororo's life. Haven't decided whether to introduce Forge and/or Bishop in this one......may or may not. And then is Marie and Logan. A whole new ballgame.

-This review goes for both chapter two and three- Two interactions with groups of my favorite mutants, though you portray both Logan and Remy like two men that don’t akin each other. I am for camaraderie they shared in earlier X-Men and Wolverine issues, and therefore have troubles as seeing them so distant so to speak. As I know, there is no other member of the team that Logan has taken back to Madripoor other then Jubes and Gambit. That being said, I can understand that the situation would make both of them acting a bit weird (from my point of view). Got a feeling of family in these two chapters, quite uplifting after that first chapter :)

Author's Response: Once again, movieverse fic. Logan doesn't like pretty much any and everyone. What you have stated is correct for the comicverse fics, but not my movieverse ones.

Oh My God what is going on?! Is that Mystique, I was under the impression it was Jean, although I had my reservations about how Jean knew the location of Wolvie's haunts. Now if it's Mystique, what does she mean that Sabretooth has another...If it is Sabretooth we're speaking about and not possibly Magneto?! I dont know how I feel about Wolvie in this story. I'm with him, but then I feel he's making all these horrible mistakes for one woman....when he should make a move any move. But then I understand his hesitation and of course the need and how these other women do calm that need. All In all this chapter does raise quite a few questions, and solidifies that Wolvie is a man-whore. I need to see some more Storm though...I also was hoping to see some flashbacks of that opera night....I thought that would be interesting to hear about! Again another great piece of work BW and of course your leave us hanging for more and wondering what the hell is going on. But hopefully not for too long! VB

Author's Response: I deliberatly did that.....and it is not Creed. Just check the X-Men movies and the Ultimate comicverse. And Wolvie's moves will come into the open soon!! And the fact that Wolverine is a man-whore is clear for everyone to see!! Even he admits that. Will have Storm soon!!

Now this was a nice piece. The entire conversation was excellent. Heartfelt, raw, and it brings us into Storm's mind. Not to mention the introduction of a very important character to Storm and how he affects her, and her relationship or possible relationship with Wolverine. Excellent piece and I definitely want to see part two. I also loved that Storm was already carrying Wolverine's scent..maybe it should be mentioned verbally!

Author's Response: Well Storm and the cigar smoke scent coud just as well be because Wolverine had been smoking around her.....or was it as you hinted!! We will know....won't we??