[Report This]Date: 10-20-05 - 08:52 pm Title: Trust
Of course the greatest new story by BW. I love this.....This story just has so much potential and i can't wait to see the dynamics between Wolverine and Jean (furthered), Storm and Jean, Storm and Wolvie, Scott with Jean, Wolvie and Storm. This is going to be mind blowing because it will also affect the students to see their elders and teachers in such turmoil. And the greatest part is I get to hate Jean all I want!! Feel so bad for scott he does get teh bad end of the stick!
Author's Response: Have some Storm *talk* coming up in the next chapter....but with Wolvie or Jeannie. As for hating Jean, it is not as much a question of her being evil, as it is of her not being able to handle the Phoenix powers properly!!
[Report This]Date: 10-20-05 - 04:24 pm Title: Trust
Sorry Bats for the mistake, don't hold it against me. I like the different views from people, I would like to see scott, but I would also like to see the Professor. Not to many people seem to go with Charles views on the whole situation. I like please continue.
Author's Response: Nevah mind!! Scooter will definitely come, but not so soon. And the Prof, although he will be a difficult one, depending on how much he decides to know, will have something from him too. Will update soon.....and thanks for your reviews. Always appreciate when readers submit them!!
[Report This]Date: 10-20-05 - 02:28 pm Title: Trust
I like hearing another perspective on the goings-on of the mansion. I like the Marie/Logan dynamic. I'd love to read what Scooter thinks of all of this, Logan and above all Ororo. Please tell me she isn't going to be Ok with Wolverine screwing Jean. Even if she and he aren't together, how can he professt that she owns his heart while he's stickin' it to her best friend? I can't see Ro just being hunky-dory with that. I think she'd be disappointed, and hurt and feel betrayed. (But that's just me) Anyways, I look forward to another update.
Author's Response: Ororo is not like the Ororo we genenrally read about or see in the movies and neither are the others. That much you must have gotten already. And for the other things, wait until they become clearer. In the mean time let me see who can I get next for a review. I had planned on Hank, but maybe not for the next one. Someone totally removed. Also haven't decided where to place Gambit....i.e. whether a new student/teacher or someone who is already known, as in the comics. Lets see!!
[Report This]Date: 10-20-05 - 09:24 am Title: Trust
Totally different vibe in this chapter :) I really like how you pointed out the connection and deep understanding between Marie and Logan. No fear towards each other. Just pure trust.
I loved her observation on Ro and Logan sitting next to each other, eating in comfortable silence.
As for a specific character's view... actually Scott comes into mind here. Is he totally unaware of what's going on? Or is he just ignoring it, hoping that everything will be alright once Jean and he are married?
Author's Response: I plan on doing on Scott, but maybe not the next one. I want to build further with a couple of other P.O.Vs. before I get down to the either Scooter, Logan or 'Ro. And although it takes from the movie characters, it is not very faithful to their depiction. Not all is black and white....there are a lot of grays here.
[Report This]Date: 10-19-05 - 07:46 am Title: Fantasy
What a cruel world! You should expand on this.
Author's Response: Thanks....will try and have an update soon!!
[Report This]Date: 10-18-05 - 03:33 pm Title: Fantasy
Did not see that coming. At all. This could develop into one of your best stories--it really could. There's a lot of potential there to be worked with. So...stay fucked up, and keep writing. It's a sound plan.
Author's Response: Thanks Windy1....**stay fucked up**....Aww, you are supposed to be my friend!! Anyways, now going to start with next update for Survival!!
[Report This]Date: 10-18-05 - 02:45 pm Title: Fantasy
What!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't believe the saint Jean is a common what????? slut I like how you did this and saved the ultimate part at the end with everyone discovering it was Jean! Why not add on to this story pleaaaaaassssseeeeeeeee begging here. It was a really good read.
Author's Response: I deliberately kept it till the last line....I had planned on revealing it a bit earlier, but dropped the idea!!
[Report This]Date: 10-18-05 - 02:44 pm Title: Fantasy
Gee... I doubt that Ro will ever let him come near her (within lightning strike range) with that kind of behaviour. Mmh, thinking about it... maybe she would. To shove a nice bolt up his ass 'cause he's definitely acting like one. He just fucks Jean so he can pretend it's Ro. And because Jean lets him. That's equally messed up. If I was Scott I would dump her. And whatever high opinion Ro might have about her "sister" will drop quite a bit as soon as she finds out what's going on. That's a real messed up sceneario you came up with here. You twisted mind you! Me likes :)))
Author's Response: Oh, nice....Well let me see how to flesh this series out!! Like I said, my mind is really screwed up nowadays!!
[Report This]Date: 10-18-05 - 12:49 pm Title: Fantasy
damn that is just fucked up!
Author's Response: Thanks!! Short and clear!!
[Report This]Date: 10-18-05 - 10:08 am Title: Fantasy
You BAD GIRL! You turning into a cold blooded writer- but me likes. :D
Author's Response: BTW in case u missed...GUY here!! Anyways, thanks for the review. Now lets see how do I build on what was going to be just a oneshot, but will be a short series cause of the favorable reviews!!
[Report This]Date: 10-18-05 - 12:54 am Title: Fantasy
ouch! that was cold but, an intersting look at that relationship
[Report This]Date: 10-18-05 - 12:53 am Title: Fantasy
ouch! that was cold but, an intersting look at that relationship
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.....This is going to be quite a dark fic...with the characters. Strongest character is Ororo!!
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