
[Report This]Date: 12-14-05 - 02:00 am Title: The Morning After Mission
The complexity you show is great. It adds layers to the story darma wise and of course the romance is simply sweet and so in character.
[Report This]Date: 12-13-05 - 08:59 pm Title: The Morning After Mission
Dude, you don't know how long i've been waiting for the next chapter in this story, even though it was worth the wait i hope you continue adding chapter every now and then.
[Report This]Date: 12-13-05 - 10:44 am Title: The Morning After Mission
Poor Logan. He hates to get close to anyone because he's so afraid of hurting them. I hope Ro understands that it's his problem and nothing to do with her. They make such a cute couple and I love the approach you're taking with putting them together. Good chapter!
[Report This]Date: 11-15-05 - 01:19 am Title: The Date
This is thoroughly enjoyable. I like the slow progression for RoLo and I like how it's different I love this.
[Report This]Date: 11-14-05 - 08:36 pm Title: The Date
Awwww...very sweet :D
[Report This]Date: 11-14-05 - 08:13 pm Title: The Date
awww this was a very cute chapter. now i've got the strong urge to find a cute guy and go putt-putting! well done :D
[Report This]Date: 10-25-05 - 05:44 am Title: Homecoming
Logan and Jean as a couple thats hard to imagine, though I understand the underlying reasoning for them. Now Logan and Ororo is easy to see, friends for ever so why not be lovers for ever? :) I think the beginning is just fine as it is, though it always seems to get down to the point of him teaching self-defence. Not that bad a reason mind you, as he is the best at what he does. It will be fun to see what you do with the couple, and the rest of the cast.
