

Date: 12-14-05 - 02:00 am Title: The Morning After Mission
The complexity you show is great. It adds layers to the story darma wise and of course the romance is simply sweet and so in character.

Date: 12-13-05 - 08:59 pm Title: The Morning After Mission
Dude, you don't know how long i've been waiting for the next chapter in this story, even though it was worth the wait i hope you continue adding chapter every now and then.

Date: 12-13-05 - 10:44 am Title: The Morning After Mission
Poor Logan. He hates to get close to anyone because he's so afraid of hurting them. I hope Ro understands that it's his problem and nothing to do with her. They make such a cute couple and I love the approach you're taking with putting them together. Good chapter!

Date: 11-15-05 - 01:19 am Title: The Date
This is thoroughly enjoyable. I like the slow progression for RoLo and I like how it's different I love this.

Date: 11-14-05 - 08:36 pm Title: The Date
Awwww...very sweet :D

Date: 11-14-05 - 08:13 pm Title: The Date
awww this was a very cute chapter. now i've got the strong urge to find a cute guy and go putt-putting! well done :D

Date: 10-25-05 - 05:44 am Title: Homecoming
Logan and Jean as a couple thats hard to imagine, though I understand the underlying reasoning for them. Now Logan and Ororo is easy to see, friends for ever so why not be lovers for ever? :) I think the beginning is just fine as it is, though it always seems to get down to the point of him teaching self-defence. Not that bad a reason mind you, as he is the best at what he does. It will be fun to see what you do with the couple, and the rest of the cast.