

Date: 12-27-13 - 05:02 am Title: The End
Beautiful. Loved all the twists and turns the story offered but my favorite part was when Ororo brought the pain. Thanks for sharing.

Date: 12-27-13 - 05:01 am Title: The End
Beautiful. Loved all the twists and turns the story offered but my favorite part was when Ororo brought the pain. Thanks for sharing.

Date: 11-29-10 - 10:32 pm Title: The End
Wow! What an absolutely wonderful story!! I do you find time to write a sequel one day!

Date: 07-17-10 - 03:40 pm Title: Downtime
Awesome story!

Date: 04-17-09 - 01:21 am Title: So Now What?
I'm loving this story so far, but in this chapter, you say that Logan lit a cigar as soon as he stepped outside with Marie. Then, a little bit later in the same "scene," you say that he wishes he had a cigar because he suddenly needed to smoke.
Author's Response: LOL, I have read and reread this story what seems a million times and so many other people have read it as well and we all missed it. I will definitely go back and fix that minor faux pas. Thanks!!!

Date: 11-08-08 - 11:17 am Title: The End
This was the perfect chapter to read on a rainy afternoon (when I'm supposed to be doing an assignment lol)! I'm sad to see te story end, but I loved every word of it!
I'm just wondering... is there a sequel being planned?
Author's Response: I've spent many a raining day reading when I should have been doing school work. As for a sequel, well I've had a great deal of thought about it but as of this moment its still really rough.

Date: 11-06-08 - 09:09 pm Title: The End
Perfect. Love Charles putting the stink eye on Forge. And I love Jean and Ororo conspiring again about the elopement, and on baby stuff. I'm very happy with how this ended.
Author's Response: I'm glad and thanks for reading it all this time.

Date: 11-05-08 - 06:43 pm Title: The End
remy's toast was lovely. sweet ending

Date: 11-05-08 - 02:10 pm Title: The End
Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for finishing this story! I absolutely loved it! :)
Author's Response: I'll be honest it was hard; this is the first really long story I've ever written. But the fact that all of you were so eager for more really helped. Thank you!

Date: 11-05-08 - 04:44 am Title: The End
aww perfection

Date: 11-05-08 - 02:27 am Title: The End
Thank you for the time and dedication. I haven't actually finished reading but I wanted to be the first to say this was great work and thank you!!!
..I'll be back! (...to give an actual review!)
Author's Response: Thank you so much; I've really enjoyed writing this.

Date: 10-13-08 - 11:37 am Title: Justice
Wow. Forge. What a dick.
Up until now, you almost empathized with him because he was kinda like a puppet whose strings were being pulled by the bad guys (as usual). But his speech to Ororo was amazing. You made me hate his guts, no mean feat. He did have a point about her ego, though, when you think about it. Poor 'Ro.
It reminds me of the Mystique series they cancelled after twenty four issues, one of my favorite titles. Mystique had a device from Forge that allowed her to stay undetected by the feds. Forge is probably wishing in this story he had one, too. Scott should have tagged him with a homing device for the bad guys to catch him!!! Whatever. Great chapter. Give us that conclusion, Bard!

Date: 10-11-08 - 01:12 am Title: Justice
Ok, let me be the first to say, "It's about gosh dang time!" I got seven chapters of my own story in since the last time you updated. ^^
But yea glad to see you back and glad to see the story is up and running again. I'm a bit surprised on the amount of restraint Logan had with the whole ordeal. I loved seeing the turnabout with Scott though, that was refreshing in itself.
Now one more chapter to go!
Author's Response: Like I said, life marched all over me and the swelling only recently left me, lol! But I'm nearly done with the last one so it'll be soon, I promise!

Date: 09-14-08 - 12:54 am Title: Reunion
Ok....So we need the next chapter to his hon. Like ASAP

Date: 09-01-08 - 10:34 am Title: Reunion
Love this story. Can hardly wait for the next chapter.