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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-12-06 - 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 12

"He's gay." LOL! Loved that scene! Ali's remark and Pete playing along unhesitatingly. Hilarious! :D
Uh oh, Logan better should have told Ro about Jean kissing him. And about what he felt while it happened. Or better, what he didn't feel.
Heh, now that's a spontaneous Scott! I have to give him that! Way to go :) His actions seemed to have the desired effect on Jean, and Logan learned how much "just a kiss" can hurt. That should show them!
Wow, Ro put on quite a show! Impressive! Yet scary. I mean, she wanted to kill! Ro of all people! There must be more behind it than just the maturity of her mutation... the voices and all... there just has to be more. Something creepy and scary... evil even.
Good thing she has Ali to talk to. Maybe she could confide in Logan, too. Well, if she decides to forgive him, that is :)

Author's Response: I like a Scott with--well balls. LOL. Ororo and Logan will have to "make up" soon. And as for Ororo's powers and weirdness-- keep reading. :) thnak you (as always dear Steph) for the rave review. Does my heart good! :D

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-12-06 - 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 12

OH MY GOD! ha...hubba...wow. What happened? I mean...wow. Poor Stormy! And...um...poor Logan. I hope she forgives him. I really do. And WOW! i didn't think Cyke had the guts to kiss Ororo. lol. And ali is crazy! :d Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: update up, BP. Update up!

Reviewer: toya Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-12-06 - 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 12

first off-you're an excellent writer...second i could not help the silly grin i had while ready the first half of this. nor the wide eyes when reading the sentinel attack
more so0n please :]

Reviewer: Rhapsody81... again Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-12-06 - 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 12

yes... again. so I read it a second time. what? i told you i think it was my fav chappy.

love the Ali-nese. those damn Blair-isms are always so quirky. even if you don't always understand them!

i liked Proff's honesty in the revelation of the ro/lo relationship. funny old man!

what a way to make a night out go wrong! damn that Jean. but damn the Ororo! kissing Scott. Yowsers!

Love that Ali once again and Bamf's dealing with being hit on by the ladies. So cute. plus, the ruskie! tres funny, chere!

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-12-06 - 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 12

HOLY SHIT!!!

that was certainly exciting from examination to near sentinel extermination. I would love to have 'Ro as a friend... though i have an Ali ;) Good enough for me!

Way to go, tweaker!

Reviewer: Darkdevil Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-11-06 - 04:11 pm Title: Chapter eleven

Ororo is kind of scaring me a little.
With, her talking at the end about
killing Logan. ohh, please don't kill
Logan in this story. I like to ask a ?
could I put you as one of my favorite
authors. I just like to ask before I
do anything. PS..Keep up going
I like it.

Author's Response: Absolutely!! **grinning** I'm flattered!! Thank you so much for the high praise....now as for your appreciated review--I make no promises but one--we are a loooong way from done. ;P

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-11-06 - 01:23 pm Title: Chapter eleven

LOL LOL! Logan standing in front of the professor in nothing but his boxers. And that too in Ro's room! :D
OMG, that blonde nurse dropping her things when Logan took off his shirt! Laughed out loud at that :D And at his "So, who wants to examine me?” LOL
But what were those test for anyway? And what about Fury's remark at Ro's comment about being a "former" thief. Is he up to something?
Loved the scene in the kitchen! And again they got caught, heh :)
But whoa! What's going on with Ro? That's so intense! I love this story! :)

Author's Response: What's going on with 'Ro...? What's going on with Logan? So many questions...hope to answer them soon. :D

Reviewer: sinisterkamui Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-11-06 - 11:33 am Title: Chapter eleven

so what was it fury was really after i wonder. i like the darker ororo cant wait for more

Author's Response: What Fury was up to will be revealed soon. Darker Ororo...Mmmmmaybe.

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-11-06 - 11:06 am Title: Chapter eleven

WOW... well, i certain got what i asked for with the tat's :D But that was unexpected, seeing energy brain waves? Freak! j/k. Loved that Ororo was jealous- she's experiencing conflicting emotions. it's a pleasure to see. And the prof catching them?! HAHAHAHA!!! i will NEVER tire of that.

MORE, I DEMAND IT!

Author's Response: Yer a demanding little thing, ain't ya? I like a more approachable "real" 'Ro too.

Reviewer: hnyswtypie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-06 - 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 10

Loved the girl-talk between Ali and Ro. There's something about the way you write the relationship between these two that is just...right.

[i]“I think I’m falling in love with you, Ororo.”[/i]

I just about melted!

Author's Response: I would've if he'd said that to me! ;) Ali and Ro are great together!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-07-06 - 10:13 am Title: Chapter 10

No that is not a problem! Not a problem at all!

*gives fan back to charmer* Thanks, it came in handy!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-06 - 08:54 am Title: Chapter 10

Do Storm an' Wolvie do anything else in this story? I mean besides sex. ;) Very nice chapter! I wonder how deep Jean can blush when she picks up thoughts from Storm or Wolvie about what happened. :D

Author's Response: Uhm, no. They won't do anything else. Will that be a prolem? LOL. More soon, Panther!!

Reviewer: rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-06 - 08:01 am Title: Chapter 10

damn. where do i begin?

You know what i'm going to say first, but here it is anyway: I LOVE ALI/RO!!! You give them the best relationship in the world (written or drawn)!

Next, Mmmm... Ro in a great ged-up and Lo unabashedly nakey YUMMY!!! etc...

The end was sweet.

Author's Response: Thanks, Muse. Ali and Ro are fun. Logan = Yummy. Period. LOL.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-06-06 - 07:14 am Title: Chapter 10

Two words: Ro and Ali :D
LOL! Those two together, just priceless!
Ugh, what's with Jean? Showing some jealousy or what? *rolls eyes*
Loved it when Ro came out of her bathroom to find Logan already naked and sprawled on her bed. That's a nice picture actually... mmhh yum :D
Aww, and he finally talks about love. Too bad Ro didn't hear his sweet comment...
I'm looking forward to whatever might come next, heh :)

Author's Response: I love Ali/Ro moments. Jean is a tad green about the situation...what that means for Ororo and Logan is too soon to tell... Yes, Logan naked on a bed is a delicious picture. One I want framed and mounted on my ceiling above my bed. **sigh** More soon, Steph, and as always warm thanks for the review!!

Reviewer: Lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-05-06 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 10

Once again. . .you have written a beautiful addition to this piece. This time around it feels as if the characters are much more thoughtful and 'true to form'. The hot and the touching mix seamlessly. Keep up the fantastic writing.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review, and you're right. Not only are the characters more true to form, but my writing style is once again my own, instead of me trying to write like someone I ain't, LOL. Thank you, thank you, thank you. I sincerely can't say that enough. My inspiration is directly related to reviews, so I thank you for the fuel for the fire!

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