Okay.... So as i've told previously... I LOOOOOOOOOVE LOOOOVE LOOOOOOVE LOVE IT!!!! You already know i'm jealous of ya! :D Ya know why i love it too!

Author's Response: I know why....because I pay you. :P

As usual, awesome. I'm just going along with the ride because you always produce complex and quality type work. Again, I love the characterizations of both Ororo and Logan, there is that sum of their parts that makes sense and is plausible in their universe and it makes the story that much more enjoyable because as a reader you come across a passage or a scene thinking, "Hmm, I could see that", or "Yeah, that's so Logan or Ororo". Great stuff.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review Nikki. It is seriously much appreciated. ::Muah!:: I like a seemingly simple story with surprising depth, so you just gave me a VERY nice compliment!! More soon, and again, thank you for the encouragement! always welcome and most appreciated.

that was disturbing, it was tredding a thin line between an erotic scene and a rape. i am not sure i appreciated the scene and i wonder what storm's reaction will be to it. i actually like the way their physical relationship started in the first version. it was more tender still a little violent but not as brutal.

Author's Response: Well, that scene was meant to tread a line, but not between rape and erotic. The line between sex and violence is often a thin one, especially where excessive passion is concerned, and that's the line I wanted to push. Make no mistake, she gave consent, I made certain that was in there. ;) The emotional toll is where the real aftermath will be, as the physical--though aggressive-- was consentual. But rest assured there is a reason behind the change in scene, as it leads me to the developments of the next chapter, which I hope you enjoy.

umm.. YAAAAAAAAY you've continued with the laughter! keep doin' your thing.

Jesus, WOMAN! i took notes, but it seems i said the same thing over and over. I LOVED IT! but let's be specific about what i loved :) From beginning to near end, i laughed. This was one hell of a funny chapter! All the playful banter, like "Scooter a Masochist?" "hardly"... and that "pussy" comment. Ali and Colossus... Ali and Logan in the War Room. Hil-fucking-larious!

Secondly, there is a lot more hinting of things to come. But of course you'd only know if you knew what to look for (I feel special!!! Reaaaaaaaaal Special)

Thirdly, the biggest change, killing off Gumbo. Whoa! Bold incorporation being that he was alive before and played an integral part. This shall be interesting to say the least, with what happens next.

I like the start of this one too! I need another chapter.

Author's Response: up now. :D

Hey....what happened???? I agree your story had lost some of its oomph and speed that it had started with, but...welll, its up to you. Just hope u keep the rythem up with this one!!

Author's Response: life--that's what happened.