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Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 05:56 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen

**claps madly** Wow. That was beautiful and heart wrenching and very fulfilling. I'm grinning like an idiot. ;)

Reviewer: nickel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 05:51 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen

*sniff* yayy.

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 05:04 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen

wow, what a story, what a story!! u had me on the edge of my seat wondering what was gonna happen and if everyone was gonna make it...geez, i loved this and i'm so sad to see it go but i loved the ending and will checkin' up too see if u decide to post an epilogue...

Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 01:05 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen

brilliant ending to a great story!

thanks for the read!

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 12:13 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen

JEEZ!!! that was certainly a roller coaster!!! one question, if Ro is only about 6 weeks old, how was the sex of the baby known? or did Jeffrey use "the son" thing as a ploy to piss off Wolvie?

Anyway, Well done... Now seriously get back to those 4 chapters I've requested.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 10:59 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Devil

Uh-oh...Jeffery better quit messing around with 'Ro and her baby...or someone's gonna get hurt!

Just when I thought you couldn't make me any more tense with the action in this, you kick it up another ten notches. I hope you have another two or three chapters percolating away soon! At least one chapter for Jeffery to get his butt kicked, and another two for Ororo and Logan to recover and have a happy ending!

Reviewer: Nickel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 09:46 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Devil

UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UP_DATE_NOW.

NOOOOOWWW.

(hee! Michael Vaughn!!! ^^ lol)

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-16-06 - 09:41 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Devil

Damn.. as soo n as i left the other review, this was posted. GOOD GRAVY!!! Update this too, but ummm... i still want 4 chappies of the other story!!!

Reviewer: serial_charmer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-06 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Hand of God

oooo things are get ca-RAY-zy and i'm loving it! i'd completely forgotten about jeffrey, but what a way to bring him back. very well done!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-06 - 03:37 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Hand of God

Amazing. I had forgotten about Jeffrey in the shuffle. It totally makes sense, though. Now I can also see why Magneto would have such a vested interest in taking these guys down, too.

This is excellent, imaginative storytelling. Good work. Keep it coming.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-06 - 08:36 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Hand of God

So good! I wish I had more time to layer you in oozing sweet praise, but I have to go study. Just know that this rocked and I can't wauit for more!!

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-06 - 08:00 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Hand of God

Wolverine should've never let that kid live. damn.

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-06 - 07:35 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Hand of God

Awesome. I didn't really expect this, but I was wondering where that person disappeared off to.

Anyway, I'm really liking this. Been lurking for a bit, but I finally decided to drop a review. I love how you develop your characters.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-12-06 - 04:42 pm Title: Chapter Twelve: Consequences

Just when I thought this story was over you pull another fast one over us...I can't wait to read what becomes of them.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-12-06 - 03:22 pm Title: Prologue: Chasm

This chapter was great, not only because it had the prerequesite pillow talk between these two, but because it opened up a new conflict to keep me on the edge of my seat. The concept of them being unable to come up for air for three days was fantastic and sexy, I can see those two being pretty absorbed in each other. I hope Logan and Scott can learn to be friends again, eventually. With all of the usual wisecracking.

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