

Date: 02-04-06 - 08:52 am Title: Chapter Two: Downpour
wow, all i have to say is that this is one great story. don't take so long to update.

Date: 02-03-06 - 07:59 pm Title: Chapter Two: Downpour
oh my goSH don't do this to me.. -sits weeping like mad-

Date: 02-03-06 - 06:37 pm Title: Chapter Two: Downpour
ps. GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!! (just in case you were curious)

Date: 02-03-06 - 06:36 pm Title: Chapter Two: Downpour
Hear that? That's my heart breaking...fix it....please.

Date: 02-03-06 - 04:27 pm Title: Chapter Two: Downpour
I feel so sorry for Ro, this is so sad.
For a sec or two I thought things started to get better between them... but damn this man and his pigheadedness! How could he just walk away from her like that? She wanted to talk, even told him she wanted him back... and all he could do was turn his back on her.
I'm not giving up the RoLo hope though. At least not yet ;D

Date: 02-03-06 - 03:34 pm Title: Chapter Two: Downpour
right now i can't form a coherent thought other than one of sadness. Damn him for walking out on her again.

Date: 01-28-06 - 07:20 am Title: Chapter One: Old Flame
I read this awhile ago but was distracted by life and didn't get the chance to review. Let me just say that once again you have captured these characters and the heartwrenching emotions so vividly. I am sitting here shaking my head, making little aw's and oh's and downright cursing Logan for his pigheadedness. Please update soon!!

Date: 01-24-06 - 06:38 am Title: Chapter One: Old Flame
Logan really needs to talk about what happend. It's eating him up from the inside. He's back at the point where he thinks he doesn't deserve any good in his life.
OMG, and what happend now? The mansion on fire... 0.o
Please hurry and update soon! You can't just stop here! :)

Date: 01-24-06 - 06:10 am Title: Prologue: Chasm
It's so sad to see them like this. Still caring and loving each other, yet so far apart.
What about the others, can't they step in and help them a bit? There must be a way to get those two pigheads back together :)

Date: 01-23-06 - 12:40 pm Title: Chapter One: Old Flame
Well, I guess that answers my question on whether Jean's 'Phoenix' persona would make an appearance. *lol* More wonderful plot and character development. It was so realistic that I actually reached out and 'air-smacked' Logan in the head for his pigheadedness. But that cliffhanger was soooo wrong. You've got me on tenterhooks, so please update soon!

Date: 01-22-06 - 07:05 pm Title: Chapter One: Old Flame
No no no no no. You can't juust leave it at the moansion on fire like that. that's just inhuman! taht ain't right!

Date: 01-22-06 - 03:55 pm Title: Prologue: Chasm
no no no...how could Logan let it go so far? They both have way too much pride..they are going to need a third party to get them together. Can i suggest Remy? :)

Date: 01-22-06 - 12:38 am Title: Prologue: Chasm
Oh, I'm SO happy to see you writing again! I was worried "Light" had fallen to the wayside! (Though I'm sorry for the reason you've been gone!) I agree with those who said that you really make us feel the pain these two are feeling - and it's perfectly believable after something like that. It would have been easy to say they just lived happily ever after once she survived, but you're taking the more realistic path, which will only make their journey back to each other all the more poignant! Can't wait to read more!

Date: 01-20-06 - 12:57 pm Title: Prologue: Chasm
I loved "Light," and it doesn't seem that this sequel will disappoint either. Your trademark plot and character development, and emotive writing style are all here. How will the rift between Logan and Ororo be healed? When will Ororo walk unaided again? When will FoH strike again? And will see anymore of Jean's "Phoenix" persona? I look forward to discovering the answers and much more. A very nice opening chapter.

Date: 01-18-06 - 08:36 pm Title: Prologue: Chasm
wow...my heart hurts. like, really bad. i loved "light" so much and i can't wait to see what you do with "blackout!" wonderful start!!