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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03-04-15 - 11:24 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen

Good story

Reviewer: stormlover Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-05-13 - 12:01 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen

Wow....great sequel. Loved all the twists and turns. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Reviewer: QTFic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-10-10 - 12:38 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen

Another wonderful story with a beautiful ending. You truly have a gift!!

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-21-09 - 02:43 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Devil

...what? please say you're going to write more! it's a cliff hanger!! is there a part 3 to this? i want to cry!! lol what happens next?!
lol if you can't tell already i like the story

Reviewer: Michaela Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-09-08 - 12:06 am Title: Chapter Two: Downpour

Wow...When you said "bumpy ride" you really meant it! Honestly, this is the first fic ( trust me, I have read countless in the past ) that has made me shed more than a few tears. And that was this chapter alone. Your previous fic "Light" was also moving me to tears from time to time...that's a good thing! lol Anyways, I can't wait to see what the rest of "Blackout" has in store for my favorite couple!

Reviewer: conlai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-04-07 - 11:49 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Devil

Hiya, me again!^^

Evil and bad people there in South Germany... you got that right. ;-) I'm from the North - oy, my luck, eh?^^

May I suggest " Weg vom Gitter! Sofort!" instead of
"Schritt weg vom Gatter! Jetzt!" ? It's more like we speak here in Germany. And - sorry for my mistakes.^^

Greetz

Conlai

Reviewer: conlai Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-04-07 - 11:08 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Hand of God

Great story. I like how you write Ro and Logan together. I got hooked immediatly and I've read so far and - stopped 'cos I was laughing so hard about the german translations.
Well, I suck at writing english so I ain't offended. ^^

I'd like to correct this creepy and funny german bable fish spilled out. You ok with that I hope.


Freeze! Hands up! Drop your weapons!
Keine Bewegung! Hände hoch! Waffen fallen lassen!

We mean no harm. Our plane crashed.
Wir wollen Euch nichts tun. Unser Flugzeug ist abgestürzt.

We are looking for five mutant criminals. You match the descriptions.
Wir suchen nach fünf Mutanten-Verbrecher. Ihr paßt auf die Beschreibung.
(for this funny - looking "ß" you can write "ss" instead)

Is being a mutant a crime?
Ist es ein Verbrechen ein Mutant zu sein?

You may ask the Leader yourself.
Das kannst du den Anführer selber fragen.




Now I'm off reading more of your wondeful RoLo ffs. Keep them coming.
Greetings from Germany

Conlai

Author's Response: Oh, cool! Someone to correct my German. Thanks a ton, I'll fix the errors when I get a chance :)

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-25-06 - 02:34 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen

Yes. Write an epilogue. Something that catches up with either the pregnant couple or the married couple. Or even the pregnant, marrying, about to pop any time now couple! I'd love to hear Ororo complaining about not being able to see her feet.

C

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-22-06 - 11:40 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen

What a wonderful way to end this story :D After all the chaos and hurt they had to go through this is just perfect!
Loved how he just knew how to talk to Ro to get her into fighting mode. Loved his proposal on the jet. Still smiling at that.
Logan totally engrossed in watching the ultrasound of his child was soo sweet. He's gonna make a fantastic daddy :)
Well, like I said, a wonderful way to end this story.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-22-06 - 11:25 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Devil

She's pregnant. And neither of them knew. What a horrible and ugly way to find out about something beautiful like that. Come on Logan, free yourself! Come on Jeannie, bring the cavalry! Ro, just use that damn lightning! On to the next chapter... can't stop, must go on reading, need to know...

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-22-06 - 11:13 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Hand of God

Jeffrey, right... had forgotten all about him. Damn... Stupid fanatics and their even more stupid followers... never understood that crazy concept. But it seems to work. For stupid people :)

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-22-06 - 10:56 am Title: Chapter Twelve: Consequences

Mmmm, three days just Logan and Ororo... That must have been good :D
Uh-oh, with all teams under attack someone knew they were coming. But who gave them the info?

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-20-06 - 10:01 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen

I want more! This was so sweet and touching and perfect after the hell they went though..Im almost sad to see this go but I have To Survive to look forward to so i can't complain...much

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-20-06 - 09:44 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Devil

that strange..why is Ro just standing there? Is he holding her captive somehow?

Reviewer: Voli23 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-17-06 - 12:04 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Fallen

wonderful!

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