

Date: 01-24-06 - 03:14 am Title: The Call
I was hoping for the arm rest to burst under Logan's deathgrip while listening to Scott's little speech :)
Even now Ro already has that calming effect on him. Can't wait until they meet again...

Date: 01-24-06 - 02:53 am Title: New Student
Oh, those damn bullies again. Good thing Jubes is coming for the rescue :)

Date: 01-24-06 - 02:36 am Title: Prologue: Divergence
It's sooo good you got back to this story!
I liked the first version a lot, even though Logan was a little on the shy side. Okay, maybe not just a little, heh :) But hey, it's AU and the given circumstances made it work. I thought he was quite sexy in his shyness :) But a not-so-shy but straight forward Logan is pretty hot, too. So I can't wait for the chapters to come to see what you have planned for this story this time! :)
Loved the background info you gave here.
Author's Response: I got quite a few reviews about the 'shy' Logan and that's what made me do the revision of the storyline!!
As for the backgrounds, they are to be a part of the story...further along the way!!

Date: 01-24-06 - 12:08 am Title: Boys n’ Girls
did you revise this so that JEAN would be the one to start somethin with Logan?!
Author's Response: Nope, no Jean-Logan thing here....might have something on Ororo's side though...but 'definitely' NOT with Jean!!

Date: 01-23-06 - 11:27 pm Title: Boys n’ Girls
I'm normally not a fan of AU, but you've got me hooked. The flashbacks are especially well done - got me all emotional! Overall, pretty plausible story - I'm convinced :)
Just 2 quick questions:
1. in the "Prologue" - where was Logan's parents - were they killed off by those two men? Who wanted him dead?
2. When Logan found Jubilee, what was he doing in LA?
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: His parents....well, they will come into play further along in the story.
As for LA, forgot to mention why he was there....but just for info sake, part-time trucker!!
Date: 01-21-06 - 04:18 pm Title: New Student
"oriental" isn't the right term for Asians, it's more suited for a rug. Could you change that please?
Author's Response: I sure will....thanks for pointing that out. However, try to think how it fits with the timeline of the chapter and not present times.
Now let me see where did i use that word.

Date: 01-21-06 - 06:48 am Title: Prologue: Divergence
i dont get it, in the last 'first impressions', logan had met mariko in another place, how come he is already in new york??? plz say he has aiko and jubille coz i liked that lol
good luck with next chapter
i lyk the flashbak though explains quite a bit bout logans and ororos past
Author's Response: The flashbacks were given for that specific reason. In the first, I felt that I drew away from the main storyline, and had to pedal back a bit. Hopefully that won't happen now!!

Date: 01-21-06 - 01:45 am Title: Prologue: Divergence
Now that is a great beginning. I really enjoyed reading that. Getting a quick but thorough perspective of their lives and history, to how both their characters developed due to circumstance, fate, and factors. I can't wait to read more..and thanks for listening. I can't wait to see the new Wolverine....hope he's as masculine and straight forward as I remember....No Pansy Ass here!
VB
Author's Response: The only reason I picked this up again...so soon, was your feedback and continuing interest. Hope this time it works out better.