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Reviewer: persnikitty5 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-27-12 - 12:13 pm Title: 13

Great story!

Reviewer: QTFic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-02-12 - 06:36 pm Title: 13

I am so glad you did a sequel to this story or
I would have missed this and that would have been a shame! I can't wait to read the sequel. I hope Ororo's baby is alright!

Author's Response: :) thank you so much for reading this and the sequel, I am going follow this one through

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-08 - 09:51 pm Title: 13

I hope Ro and the baby are going to be ok, I can't wait to see how things turn out in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Sweet Pea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-08 - 05:25 pm Title: 13

Oh no!!! Please let the baby be okay. 'Ro has come a long way and this will set her back.

Reviewer: lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-21-08 - 09:13 am Title: 13

okay...i love this story....please please please tell me she is not going to lose the baby....please


okay...you're the author do what you want...but please please please

Reviewer: VenomQueen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-13-08 - 06:04 pm Title: 12

Yay! She's letting him in.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-11-08 - 10:29 am Title: 12

Darn that 'Ro. She's keeping that poor man on his toes. Must be the pregnancy hormones kicking in.

I liked how you wrote Logan. He was upset, but he wasn't growling or threatening or pissed as he could have been in a situation like this. I like that you could see her breaking down bit by bit. I want to read the next chapter once you have it!

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-10-08 - 12:14 pm Title: 12

I can't wait to see how things turn out in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-25-08 - 02:08 pm Title: 11

Man, 'Ro's trippin'!

Big risk, having Ororo planning to get rid of it, particularly if she's already thinking of raising the baby elsewhere, too. The bit about "do you just wanna catch AIDS?" raised my eyebrows.

You've still got me. I want to see how this turns out. I also want to see Logan step up to the plate on this one and prove he loves her. Man better walk the walk!

The only thing here that lacked intensity was this:

“’Ro you know I love you, if I had let you die that day you don’t know how much that would have screwed me up”.

There isn't much here showing his physical reaction to her telling him he should have let her die. "Screwed me up" here just feels like she forgot to wash his whites or update his day planner. He could've almost said "If I had let you die that day, I would've wanted ta kill myself, 'Ro! I would've wanted ta f---in' die!" But I'm overdramatic that way. He should have been gripping her hands or shoulders or something, here, too. The man's baby's on the line.

I hope you update this soon. More, please.

Reviewer: Angel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-18-08 - 12:47 am Title: 10

Please let this be a good new start for ROLO. My heart is breaking for them.

Reviewer: Cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-17-08 - 11:51 am Title: 9

I'm really enjoying this. This might be your best story.

I think what I like is how drawn to Ororo Logan is, kind of a "kid with his hand in the cookie jar" relationship. She cares about him, but doesn't want to interfere with what he has with Jean, etc. But it's just well done. Familiar theme, but just very well done. The pregnancy test scene had me nodding, too!

Author's Response: I would hug u right now :) Thanks alot for reviewing and ur reviews are either positive or constructive critism - they both help U are the best!

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-06-08 - 01:52 am Title: 9

Update soon

Reviewer: CrimsonSin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-03-08 - 11:01 am Title: 9

Wow what great chapter.

Reviewer: thewindrider278 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-02-08 - 04:13 pm Title: 1

This fic has a lot of potential but I feel like the scene was a little rushed and the transition between emotional breakdown and sex felt a little uncomfortable. You could do a little more to enhance the emotional background of the story... It just feels too shallow. I'd love to help if you would like.

Author's Response: Thank you, i would like your help

Reviewer: Angel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-02-08 - 01:47 pm Title: 9

This is a interesting version of Ororo. Her fear, yet determination to make it on her own are puzzeling and intriging. That said, I hope she realizes how much she really needs Logan soon.

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