[Report This]Date: 07-01-06 - 05:19 pm Title: Just Before Dawn
(gasp, wheeze, gasp) Still trying to catch my breath here...whoo, boy. Thankfully I just got back from a walk to the craft store with my daughter, and I already had a cold glass of ice water at my desk, because I would have needed one after this chapter. "Never mess with a Wolverine. Ok, got it." Again, perfect line, delivered with cunning accuracy and skill. Poor Logan...you wanted me to pity him, didn't you??? Well, I kind of do, now, but he still got what he had coming. Let's see how he redeems himself. And let's see more of Alex, Lorna, and Ali, I absolutely love them already.
Author's Response: Redemption has no meaning here....Sorry that song lyric just popped into my head. Alex, Lorna, Ali and Hank will be seen again. No worries there, I loved them too. I get so flattered and proud when you review! Loving Wine and Roses, it's so real and makes me happy. Making me happy is important. I'm sucha utalitarian, *sigh* I'll probably burn in hell, but ah well.
[Report This]Date: 07-01-06 - 04:33 pm Title: Just Before Dawn
BRILIANT! Absolutely briliant! I absolutely loved everything in this chapter! The ROLO scene was HOT! And i also sais a lot about how these two feel about each other, but they're both too damn proud to admit it! I love the growing bond between Scott & Ro aswell. Jeans i just such a bitch. Scott deserves better! Update really soon! Oh and i LOVed teh last bit of logan...
Author's Response: **Grinning** Thank you! Logan has his mind set now, and we know how that man can be when his mind's set. Look out, 'Ro, here he comes *snicker at own bad pun*
[Report This]Date: 07-01-06 - 04:31 pm Title: Just Before Dawn
OMG!!! I loved this chapter. It tickled me to death and made me a little misty too. Poor Scott. :( I hope he dumps Jean and goes back to Lorna. They seem like they could be great together. I like that 'Ro and Scott kissed to make sure they didn't harbor any feelings for one another, besides friendship. It was sweet.
LOGAN!!! I nearly fell out of my chair laughing so hard at what happened in the rec room. Wow. That was probably one of the best "almost sex" scenes I've ever read. It was fantastic. I'm still laughing and slightly turned on. *wiggles eyebrows*
Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: That rec room scene was uhm...interesting to write to say the least. I had to stop once to regain composure, *wink* You know a man like Logan takes that kind of thing as a severe knock to his manhood and pride, soooo we'll see how he deals with it. ;) More soon,
[Report This]Date: 07-01-06 - 04:19 pm Title: Just Before Dawn
*dies from laughter*
Go Ro!!! got Logan like an over excited teenaged boy, lol. Although I can't blame him that was HAWT!!!!
Aww, more ScotRo :) Loved it! He came to check up on her :) And that kiss, I liked it esp since Lo saw it. "Snoopy boxers" Did I say I'm loving Scott more and more? Glad to see him getting libterated :)
I can't wait to see what tomorrow bring!
Author's Response: Scott wears Snoopy boxers, because Snoopy ROCKS, and so does Scott. *sigh* he's so drool worthy...*ahem* I mean, yeah. Uhm, what were we talkin' about again? :P
[Report This]Date: 07-01-06 - 03:52 pm Title: Just Before Dawn
GODDAMN WOMAN!
Whew! You you really worked your mojo on this chapter and so did Ro on Logan! She got him REAL GOOD! Ha Ha! Loved this! Hot,sexy,frantic and soothing all rolled into one! MORE!MORE!MORE!
Write on windrider1,write on!
Author's Response: :D You're so funny, EL. Have a good day at work hon! I'll be thinking of you and a shit splattered dog all day--thanks! :P
[Report This]Date: 07-01-06 - 03:43 pm Title: Just Before Dawn
ok, i am now convinced this is the best you've written yet. he creamed himself? thats pretty hilarious. scott's a man after my own heart, if that jean bitch dont want him write me in! dear lord he's HOT. the friendship between rory and scott makes my heart smile, thats phenomenal.
Author's Response: No one ever gives Logan an embarassing moment, so I figure it was high time he one. (Could just be my subconscious petty retaliation at Marvel for the whole Wolverine/Emma thing but ehn.) Ro and Scott are forging a really strong bond, that will be tested in the coming chapters....**bum bum buuuuuum** stay tuned.
[Report This]Date: 06-30-06 - 03:59 pm Title: Rebellion
Loving it. Write more write more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to get another update up soon.
[Report This]Date: 06-30-06 - 03:57 pm Title: Rebellion
Wow! Missed a coupla updates and I come back to this? It's impossible for my mouth to close right now I', grinning!
Firstly, Scott, hon, come let me wrap my legs...I mean arms around you. You obviously need a good...hug, yeah. I wanna hug the daylights outta you. I am really really loving Scott. While I'm glad he isn't oblivous I'm sad he's accepting of it. He deserves so much better. I hope this Scott-Ro friendship continues, I'm loving it. He decked Wolvie eh? Go Scott!
Interesting what Lorna brough up about Jean possibly mind screwing Scott, I like it.
"Balls deep" that just slays me.
And I'm anxiously awaiting the upcoming RoLo!
Author's Response: I can not stop laughing at this review!! hug the daylights outta ya LMAO The Scott/Ro friendship was rather unexpected, as I had no intentions of it morphing into anything other than plot filler, but it has grown on its own so therefore it stays. (That and I'm reeeeaaalllyy liking Scotty-boy.) Yes, he decked Logan, no it's not the last time these two will get into it, and Lorna may be right...we'll see. ;)
[Report This]Date: 06-29-06 - 05:39 pm Title: Rebellion
Oh my gosh! This was GREAT!!! I love the dynamics between the characters. And Scott....I didn't know he had it in him...and obviously, neither did he (smile). And Ororo is stirring up trouble....I LOVE IT!!!!
I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Next update soon. Having way too much fin here. :D
[Report This]Date: 06-29-06 - 05:37 pm Title: Rebellion
Great update! And fun. I just couldn't sto grinning. And you showed such a nice side of Scott, one that no one really knew he had! And that punch! "He looks at her like a man possessed" wow...if other people can see it Logan really has it bad! What is his reactio to Scot'ss statement? I'm sure he heard. What about Ororo's?You just gotta have something on that next chapter! I am soo ready for some RoLo lovin'!
Author's Response: Ready for the RoLo lovin' eh? Hm, we'll see what I can do about that. :D *wicked grin*
[Report This]Date: 06-29-06 - 02:59 pm Title: Rebellion
Aww, poor poor Scott. Come hear and sit down. Put your head rught hear...I'll make you feel better. You wont even remember the evil red bush. Muhahahahahaaaa!
YOU.MUST.UPDATE!
One more thing: Go Scotty, Go Scotty, Go Scotty, GO GO GO!
Ororo is queen of all things, loved Hank, Alex, Lorna and most def Ali.
Author's Response: LMAO. Great review!! Makes my night. Update in the works...as soon as I stop playing in photoshop. But eventually yeah. :D
[Report This]Date: 06-29-06 - 07:19 am Title: Rebellion
Another great chapter. I'm glad Scott knew what was going on. I couldn't stand to see him devastated by Jean and Logan's infidelity. I'm loving the growing friendship b/t 'Ro and Scott. Scott is definitely likeable/loveable in this fic. I'm glad he stood up for 'Ro too.
It was fun to see Hank, Alex and Lorna too. I love that Lorna hates Jean. I think I believe Lorna about Jean manipulating Scott's mind. Of course, Alison is always fun to see.
Logan! That's a threat I wouldn't mind being fulfilled. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Scott's not nearly as ignorant as Jean likes to believe he is. I like the friendship too, so don't expect it to evaporate upon future chapters. Whether or not Lorna is accurate where Jean is concerned...hmm..we'll see. I had fun with her, Hank and Alex too. Ali will pop in again from time to time. :D As for Logan's threat...next update in the works. *wink*
[Report This]Date: 06-29-06 - 07:08 am Title: Rebellion
Should I be falling for Scott? Cuz I am thanks to you...and I don't think Wolvie would like that one bit! Awesome chapter i love the bonding between the two..and i cannot wait till the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm kinda crushing on Scooter too so don't feel bad. *wink*
[Report This]Date: 06-29-06 - 05:39 am Title: Rebellion
“He looks at you like a man in heat. He looks at her like a man possessed.”
What a perfect line. My thoughts exactly, although I've never been able to phrase them this well.
I love Dazzler. Her and 'Ro make the best dynamic duo ever. This is great.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I love Dazz too, therefore I couldn't leave her out. :D
[Report This]Date: 06-29-06 - 05:34 am Title: Rebellion
Damn, I never really was a big fan of Cyke, but your version of him... damn! So very, very likable if not to say hot 'n sexy :D
Nice effect Ro has on him, I hope those changes will be of permanent nature. That'll show Jean what she has in him, what she's risking with her stupid behaviour. And Logan... pfft! Arrogant jerk! Way too sexy for his own good, dammit! I cannot wait for the RoLo to come but I'd like him to suffer a tad bit more first, heh :) And I'd like to see whatever is going to happen in Ro's control, not his.
Loved when Scott punched Logan in the nose. Loved it even more when he told Jean the reason for that LOL LOL! :D OMG :D
This is sooo good!
Author's Response: Logan is way too sexy for his own good, isn't he? And that's about to be turned up a notch in the next chapter. LOL. Let's see how that works out.
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