

Date: 06-29-06 - 03:56 am Title: Rebellion
That was awesome! Scott and Logan fighting over Ororo and not Jean....what a different situation. All of a sudden I'm pulling for a Ororo/Scott kiss even though RoLo must happen. Good chapter!
Author's Response: RoLo must happen, it's a natural law. ;) Buuuuuuut who's to say when. LOL. More soon.

Date: 06-29-06 - 03:41 am Title: Rebellion
like oh my gosh! loveing scott in this fic! he sounds totally hawt. *le sigh* if only he and lorna could go out and force jean out of the picture...
Author's Response: Scott is uber hawtness, isn't he. Watch out Logan...someone's taking your edge. LOL.

Date: 06-29-06 - 02:41 am Title: Rebellion
There is nothing better than a good fic to enjoy over my morning coffee. And this one is just awesome.
I truly enjoy the way you write Scott. I think the comics often mishandled his character, turning him into too much of a Boy Scout. Here, you're giving him somewhat of a wilder side, while staying true to his character. It's fantastic! I very much enjoy the relationship with Storm.
And Scott knows all about Jean and Wolvie. Interesting. Poor boy is just willing to roll over and let it be. I do think that his history with Lorna has something to do with that, and that's very sad. Poor boo. Jean manipulating him? Oh, I so don't put it past her.
The "rescue" from Jean and Wolvie was great! I love that Scott decked him. I just really have loads of love for this version of Scott, which is highly unusal of me!
Oh! I love their banter, but this is the best line ever: He looks at you like a man in heat. He looks at her like a man possessed.
*drools* I really can't wait for more!
Author's Response: *grins like I won the lottery* Thanks! I am still getting over your latest WtL chapter. OMG, brilliant (yes, I know I said it before). That last line expresses very much how I see RoLo. Jean is lust, Ororo (if Marvel ever pulled its head from its ass) would be obsession. Primal and fierce. But that's why there is fanfic and delicious writers such as yourself. :D

Date: 06-29-06 - 01:54 am Title: Rebellion
Mmmm...Love the Yummy Updates. I found the updated 5min. Before i left work at 1am. I printed it out to read on the train ride home. You could just imagine how excited i was at the prospect of reading 19 pages of Windrider written goodness.
So, i'm on the 2 train heading to Brooklyn, enjoying the scott and storm friendship, the Wolverine jealousy, and of course the introduced antics of Ali, when.....JEZUSFUCKDAYUMN! (Yes, i actually said/yelled/whimpered this on a crowded train at 1:30am) I found out that I'm missing the last five pages of the fic.
I search through my bag. Nothing. I search the train floor. Nothing. I started to feel the slight beginings of hyperventalation. I wanted to cry. I don't think i've ever made it home so fast from the subway station in my life when my stop finally came up.
I'm so happy Scott is developing a back bone. Poor Poor Cyke...I hope after the night out he finally shows Jean that he can drop it like its HOT. lol. I loved the last line that he said. Wolverine looking at Storm like a man possessed. Mmmm....can't wait to read the next chapter. Favorite line in this one: "Gonna Fuck ya soon". LAWD GAWD. GIVE ME MORE!!!
Okay off to bed now. *smoochies*
Author's Response: Awwwww. **hugs** I love you. Seriously. When we get married I'll shout it from the rooftops. More soon. Oh, btw, only 36 more hours!!!!! Get to it.

Date: 06-29-06 - 01:24 am Title: Rebellion
Awesome. Just awesome. GREAT dialogue, esp. the "Nice boys" part in Burger King.
Author's Response: Yeah, I liked that unexpected line from Scooter. Sometimes I swear they come alive in my head. I need a life...*sigh* :P

Date: 06-29-06 - 01:19 am Title: Rebellion
one word. . . .fabulous.
Author's Response: Two words....Thank you! :D

Date: 06-29-06 - 12:55 am Title: Rebellion
CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE..LOVE THIS SCOTT AND LORENA
Author's Response: Lorna was fun, and interesting to add in. :D

Date: 06-29-06 - 12:49 am Title: Rebellion
I hope ororo is able to resist logan. He's too arrogant. Of course you can lust after someone it doesn't mean your brain isn't working it's just a little harder with temptation.
Author's Response: He is arrogant, isn't he? But then again, with his reputation at being the "best" who can blame him. *snicker* More soon. ;)

Date: 06-29-06 - 12:35 am Title: Rebellion
Um, as Original Ceenote pointed out, "BALLS DEEP,HUH?"
Oh man! You just turned the burner up to HIGH! Especially with, "Gonna fuck you soon"
We are all going to hell with you windrider1 (happily)! You make me lust for a man that isn't real so I have to take it out on my defenseless boyfriend and he thanks you profusely! by the way! I pray that Logan's threat/promise/warning comes to fruitation in the next chapter! A phone call is coming your way about the last 2 chapters! Write on windrider1, write on! You naughty minx!
Author's Response: Thanks for the call, El. :D You always keep me uber motivated!!

Date: 06-29-06 - 12:13 am Title: Rebellion
Oh my stars and garters. Balls deep. PETA Protected. Nympho. Blue Agave (holy shit, a double shot???).
...these are a few of my favorite things!!!! (I'm making like Julie Andrews here)
This is fabulous again, steamy, funny, smart, and so insightful in regard to what all the characters are thinking. This is, above all, a successful ensemble piece where every character matters. I want the steamy chapter coming next as much as the next reader, but I also can't wait for Jean to do some soul-searching into how she's been treating Scott, he deserves a break soon. Eventually...let Ororo and Scott play with her head some more first!!!
Author's Response: The next chapter will definitely mess with some heads, and set a the pace and tone for the coming chapters. Let'see if I can pull another good line out of my ass, eh? Just read your latest update, will review it after a second read. I'm grinning too much now, LOL. I need a cold shower too. Thanks a lot. :P

Date: 06-28-06 - 11:01 pm Title: Rebellion
WOOOOOOOOOOO_HOOOOOOOOOO, YEAH BABY!

Date: 06-27-06 - 05:33 pm Title: Green Eyed Monster
oops, i forgot: VIVA LA FANFIC!! (apparently that's our battle cry, now?)
Author's Response: Yes, ideedy that is our battle cry. And I know your soft spot for Scooter. I gotta admit, he's growing on me too, LOL. Stupid Jean. :P

Date: 06-27-06 - 05:31 pm Title: Green Eyed Monster
ok ok, i loooove wolvie and storm together. they're perfect yada yada yada. that said (::covers wolvie's ears::), how sad is it that your story's got me wanting cyke and ro together? now, you know me, if it weren't for rolo i'd be a die-hard cyke storm 'shipper. i think they're fantastic together (when done the right way, of course) but never before has one of YOUR fics made me really want wolvie thrown to the curb. violently. and he's not really even being that nasty. he was much crueler at the beginning of KC (esp. the first run at it, wow-wee!) he's being typical wolvie but for some reason, i don't want them to end up together. NOW, i CAN'T imagine you'd have storm end up with cyke in this story, so rest assured, by the end of the story i'm sure i'll want RoLo...Well done, chippie!

Date: 06-27-06 - 01:05 am Title: Green Eyed Monster
oiy you ended it there i have you figured out you are pure evil for only someone that was could do that to me write more soon
Author's Response: Not pure evil, just partially. :P

Date: 06-26-06 - 09:31 pm Title: Green Eyed Monster
I love ultimate (esque) Scott. I love the official one and I looooooooove yours. Such an uber hott nerd. Stupid freakin Jean. I hope she chokes on some food, messin around on a sweetie like that.
This reminds me of back in the day when Scott and Ro were actually best friends. *le sigh*
And don't even get me started on how seein Logan swallow his own medicine makes me feel. (BTW it makes me feel good!)
Author's Response: *Waves at Reiko* Hey! Thanks so much for the review. An update from you soon? *hopeful puppy eyes* 'Ro and Scott are genuine friends in this, so no worries that I'll make either flake out on the other. That doesn't mean much drama isn't about to ensue, because it is. ;) Lots coming up. It makes me feel good to see Logan (especially Ultimate Logan) getting some harsh medicine. I really hate how Marvel has Ult. Storm panting after Wolverine and him still ignoring her in favor of Jean. *Sigh* Fuckin' Marvel. Buuuuut this is why there is fanfic. So, VIVA LA FANFIC, Baby!