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Reviewer: ToughSpirit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-30-06 - 11:03 pm Title: Realisation

Don't end the story there. There is so much more to explore to the story.

Reviewer: tamazi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-18-06 - 02:27 pm Title: Realisation

oohh no! dont finish there!! tell me ur gonna have another chapter!!

Author's Response: We shall see. I'm thinking of doing a sequel, but I still haven't decided yet...

Reviewer: ToufghSpirit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-14-06 - 09:39 pm Title: As simple as riding a bike

I'm glad the chapter was longer. And I like the refrence to Halle Berry's movie Gothika, I thought that was kinda funny. Update soon.

Reviewer: tamazi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-13-06 - 01:00 am Title: Reborn through murder

good idea to tell us about the death of logans parents but im slightly confused, did the killer rape his own mum???

Author's Response: Yes, the killer did rape his own mother, though she was on deaths door step at the time. Maybe, because he wasn't the 'perfect' child?

Reviewer: ToughSpirit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-12-06 - 11:26 pm Title: Time to change

These chapters ar just too short, please make them longer. Update soon.

Author's Response: Your not the only one who thinks the chapters are too short. I will try to make them longer. I'm not promising anything though.

Reviewer: tamazi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-12-06 - 01:19 pm Title: Time to change

next chapter!! relly good, make chapters longer so i wont complain as much :P

Author's Response: I'm glad you like my story. Sorry the chapters are so short, but if I were to add more infomation or increase length, the stroy would be hard to follow. Thanks for the reviews.

Reviewer: Darkdevil75k Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-11-06 - 07:58 pm Title: Memories long since past Prt2

This a big surprise. Forge, a serial killer. This is going
to be wicked. As a female myself who loves to study crime this seems like Law and Order svu. Keep it coming l like it.

Reviewer: Nick Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-11-06 - 02:10 pm Title: Memories long since past Prt2

Now that is hardcore.

Reviewer: tamazi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-11-06 - 12:36 pm Title: Memories long since past Prt1

ooo! hurry and update, i really wanna find out what their relationship is!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-10-06 - 05:37 am Title: Why she appears different

Interesting start! Short but very dark and moving. Can't wait to see where you are taking this.
Please do continue :)

Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-09-06 - 10:34 am Title: Why she appears different

an intresting read, it's a very deep and slightly disturbing story, but thats comes with every story dealing withis situation.

i also find it inresting that you chose forge, i assumed a more likly candidate would have been somone like the shadow king.

but i am intrested to see who this develops update soon!

Author's Response: I suppose you right in saying that the a more likely candidate would have been the Shadow King, however it ws forge who came into my mind as I started to write this story, as a 'he seems nice, but...' Anyhow, thanks for your review. I'll try to keep up with updates : D

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-08-06 - 11:36 pm Title: Why she appears different

i'm a little confused. her molester/rapist was charles?

Author's Response: Sorry for the confusion, Forge was her child abuser/rapist, Charles is her adoptive parent.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-08-06 - 09:52 pm Title: Why she appears different

I likey! It so sad and I could picture a situation like that so easily (which is pretty sad in itself) I can't wait till Logan come and show her that touches can be good

Reviewer: Jamie B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-08-06 - 05:25 pm Title: Why she appears different

I like this, it's sad, but a good start for a meaningful story.

Reviewer: ToughSpirit Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-08-06 - 05:16 pm Title: Why she appears different

This first chapter sounds really good. I would like to see where it goes. So please update A.S.A.P.

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