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Reviewer: irish_sunset Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-10-07 - 12:47 am Title: Unexpected discovery

As Britney would say, "Gimme Gimme Gimme Gimme Gimme Gimme More!"

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-06-07 - 12:45 pm Title: Unexpected discovery

Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: athena Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-02-07 - 09:02 am Title: Home coming...

AWwwwwwww. You just can't leave me hanging like this. Please update.

Reviewer: Normally Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-26-07 - 01:12 am Title: Home coming...

Hey I love this fic, cant wait for you to udate. Please update soon. I wonder what Logan is gonna say to her.

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-20-07 - 02:38 am Title: Home coming...

Please next chapter(s), update soon. ;)

Reviewer: athena Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-20-07 - 02:25 am Title: Home coming...

Oh please update soon! I really like this fic

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-19-07 - 12:11 pm Title: Home coming...

Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: irish_sunset Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-19-07 - 11:17 am Title: Home coming...

I'm glad to see you're back! I've been missing this story. Hopefully you won't keep us waiting to long for the next one. Great update.

Reviewer: Rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-19-07 - 03:21 am Title: Home coming...

OH MY! That last line sent chiils up my spine. hehehehe She's in trouble now,. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Rolletti

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-19-07 - 12:03 am Title: Home coming...

I like the surprise last paragraph. Logan's gonna have words with her, isn't he??

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-02-07 - 09:57 pm Title: Ororo's leaving

Great chapter ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I can't wait to read the next chapter so UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-06 - 11:58 am Title: Ororo's leaving

how old is kitty?

Reviewer: ms. m Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-30-06 - 10:11 pm Title: Ororo's leaving

Lovin' it

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-30-06 - 08:16 pm Title: Ororo's leaving

The characters aren't really out of character, you just showed a few more facets that they have, but don't always express. This is a good thing. The dialogue is actually really good in this chapter, so that is a feather in your cap.

Keep watching your spellings, there are a few that needed fixing, and a couple of spots where the words ran together when you typed.

"She smiled, trying to lighten the mood alittle.Kitty" See where the words ran together there?

"memorys" needs to be "memories

Little grammatical fix needed here, too: Do you even know who the father is IF as you claim is not me?" Where you have "is not me," make it "it's not me."

Anyway, this is a great story, and you are writing the characters using great insights into what makes them tick, with a situation that could easily happen in real life. Good job.

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-17-06 - 02:59 am Title: Who's the father?

MORE! MORE! MORE!.

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