Whoa! Poor Logan got smacked across the chops! Things are heating up!

Thanks for the thanks, by the way!

There were a few other funny spellings in this chapter, but other than that, you did a good job of keeping Logan in character. "Staring" has two r's in it the way you currently have it written, and "adamantium" is hard to spell for most people, anyway, I think you have it as "adametal." "Alcoholic" is missing an 'o' I think. The paragraph spacing in this chapter is much, much better than the first, more consistent and nice and easy to read, so good job.

Can't wait to see what happens next after Ororo's latest statement! This is getting fun.

you bet your butt I want it to continue...now! Great by the way

I LIKE it. And I would love to see more. Hope you post an update soon.

Hi.

Interesting beginning. The paragraph formatting got kind of close halfway through, so I might fix that to make it easier to read, use the double paragraph spacing that you have in the first half. Watch a couple of spellings, too; "turquoise, sugary, little, and Rogue" all need fixing.

I'm enjoying this, but I'm wondering if Logan has any suspicions about Ororo's pregnancy? My curiosity is also piqued about whether there is someone else in the picture, from what you have written so far? Keep updating this.