[Report This]Date: 06-17-06 - 04:09 pm Title: 5. Bad Form
Woo-HOO. Pitch perfect angst and very, very sexy. I can picture Ororo dancing out on the floor and the scene outside the club. Brilliant. More, please!
[Report This]Date: 06-17-06 - 03:33 pm Title: 5. Bad Form
wow! interesting, poor prita is caught in the middle and now evryone knows what has happened between Storm and Logan.... and wot a good way to tell everyone! good chapter! update please :D
[Report This]Date: 06-17-06 - 03:32 pm Title: 5. Bad Form
WHOA!!!! That chapter was way intense. That argument outside of the club left me with my mouth hanging open. You're right, 'Ro and Logan can be mean. I'm glad your muse is speaking to you, because I can't seem to get enough of this story! Can't wait for your next update!
[Report This]Date: 06-17-06 - 03:02 pm Title: 5. Bad Form
oh god! things were just getting better
this is truly as complicated as real life, i think everyone knows the, 'do i? no yes hate love' feelings in a relationship lol!
i relate
[Report This]Date: 06-17-06 - 02:53 pm Title: 5. Bad Form
I've got to say I am so loving this, bloody brilliant. The imagery, the language, I can see everything happening. And something's gotta give is right, even I'm about to snap, lol j/k. Great job ::thumbs up::
[Report This]Date: 06-17-06 - 02:39 pm Title: 5. Bad Form
Oh, my God. Something has to give, indeed. :D *Great* chapter. The dance and their argument on the sidewalk...Good Lord, I think my monitor melted. And Logan playing with Prita was so great. *sigh* What is it about men (especially burly, manly men) and babies that just sets women off? :D Anyway, continue soon!
P.S. - I think we need to add an option for "Do you recommend this story?" I wanted to put HELL yes!, but it's not one of the choices. *snicker*
[Report This]Date: 06-17-06 - 02:32 pm Title: 5. Bad Form
OOOHHH!!! this should be good. name calling, yeah that can eb bad. but not wanting someone to spend time with your child? that's just hurtful
[Report This]Date: 06-17-06 - 07:01 am Title: 4. Prita's Woe
That's one... you have three more to go until this weekend is over... and that was just the minimum. If you wish to write more, please muse it up!!!
Seriously though, this story is a complex whirlwind of human honest emotion. BEAUTIFUL!
[Report This]Date: 06-17-06 - 04:34 am Title: 4. Prita's Woe
do continue
[Report This]Date: 06-17-06 - 03:35 am Title: 4. Prita's Woe
yay. i like your stories. keep on doing that stuff you do.
[Report This]Date: 06-17-06 - 03:11 am Title: 4. Prita's Woe
adopted? well i guess it makes sense, she really does need to stay away from logan though. at least at this point in the fic. that baby picture is the cutest EVAR! man, i LOVE that this is going so quickly! *giddy*
[Report This]Date: 06-17-06 - 12:18 am Title: 4. Prita's Woe
I'm loving this back and forth between our RoLo. It's nice to see them becoming more comfortable with each other. I'm still a little pissed at Logan from the first chapter, but he's steadily winning me over. I can't stay mad at Logan for too long. :) I'm happy little Prita is okay. I also like the pics and quotes at the beginning of each chapter. It sets the mood well. Looking forward to more updates!
[Report This]Date: 06-16-06 - 11:16 pm Title: 4. Prita's Woe
Damn, I was way off! So Prita isn't his, that still doesn't make me any less mad at Logan. Good chapter!
[Report This]Date: 06-16-06 - 10:25 pm Title: 4. Prita's Woe
Bless your little heart. This was great. It just made me love Logan all over again. Okay, he's forgiven for saying Jean's name, now!
[Report This]Date: 06-16-06 - 06:18 pm Title: 4. Prita's Woe
another great update! thanks!
but seriously if i fail my exams i'm blaming you! how can i revise properly thinking that you might have updated this story
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