Ash here. Finally registered so I can get updates on this. I think it's the only way I'm going to save what little is left of my sanity. :P Seriously, great chapter. Loved the way Logan just leaped into action to help her and Prita, and the scene with Scott and Renee just about killed me, lol. And the end! Hee! Fabulous! Continue soon!

You can't leave me hanging like that... This is such a good story! I don't blame Storm being pissed off at Wolvie, I still am. I know it's his daughter, but the suspense of Storm telling him is great. Can't wait for another chapter.

Both of these new chapters were beautiful. I like the bits of suspense that you throw into the closing, italic font paragraphs. I'm very addicted to this story. Prita sounds awfully cute. Can't wait to see how she came into Ororo's life.

Oh, you've made my day. Loved this chapter. Can't wait to find out what the deal is with Prita. You know, I love the way you write. You have such a handle on the characters and your narrative style and word choices, just suck me right in. :D Off to check out the next chapter. :)

first off, WOW. i've only read the first chapter and just...WOW. you were a great writer before, but somehow you've improved tenfold with this one. AND I LOVE YOU. bc now i have three chapters to print off and read at work today! thaaank you kindly :D

again WOW, logan and his thoughts, and Ororo's love for him (unreturned at the time) are so well writen, nither characters come of as weak, they still maintain they're dignity, many writters trying acomplish this tend to make the characters of ro lo change to fit more of a relationship like scott and jean, sappy and cringing.
but you really have nailed it, conveying it whilst mainting the traits of the characters.
and the ending, Ohhhhh, cant wait for an update!

This is a GREAT start. You've got me hooked. I can hardly wait for the Update. And who is Prita's dad? And will Ororo and Logan be able to forgive each other and work their way back to each other?