

Date: 06-28-06 - 10:55 pm Title: 14. Renegade
Brilliant. Gawd, I sound like a Guiness commercial. BRILLIANT I say.

Date: 06-28-06 - 06:35 pm Title: 14. Renegade
Oooh, I love this! You somehow always manage to make each chapter better than the one before it. I don't know how you do it, but damn, I'm jealous. Loved the part where she slipped and called Prita their daughter. *sigh* So perfect. Continue soon! I have to see what happens next! :D

Date: 06-28-06 - 06:05 pm Title: 14. Renegade
It's funny, I didn't know I would get an instant update when I marked this as one of my favorites! I just got the link. Cool!
I like Logan's reaction to her outfit. This story is just fun to read on a lot of levels.

Date: 06-26-06 - 10:08 pm Title: 13. Time
*sigh* the fluff was too good to last forever. why does reality always come crashing down around them?

Date: 06-26-06 - 09:57 pm Title: 13. Time
This was sooo ...........perfect! Everything that uncanny Rolo should be.
*le inhale, le sigh, and le happiness*

Date: 06-26-06 - 04:51 pm Title: 13. Time
It's even better on a second read. *happy sigh*

Date: 06-26-06 - 04:14 pm Title: 13. Time
*wipes tears* That was beautiful... And what touched me even more was what Scott said...Great job! I have one request...more fluff

Date: 06-26-06 - 04:07 pm Title: 13. Time
See, now I'm in suspense, wondering what happened in the years in-between...getting ahead of myself. Logan's immortality isn't something that people have explored much in stories, at least not in the sense of him ending up alone after his loved ones pass. This was really insightful.

Date: 06-26-06 - 03:24 pm Title: 13. Time
Mmmmmmhhh :D *sigh* Keep the fluff comin'! I love it! So good, sooooo good! Beautifully written as always. Scott's and Logan's talk about love *sigh* The lovemaking *double sigh* And I totally loved her proposal!

Date: 06-26-06 - 03:08 pm Title: 13. Time
I hope I wasn't the only one who's heart was aching when I read this. Is something wrong with Ororo? I LOVE Logan's tenderness. I nearly brokedown when "Ro proposed to him! Absolutely beautiful. *sigh*

Date: 06-26-06 - 01:22 pm Title: 13. Time
well at least we know it ends happily, but theres still sooo much to tell! lol, update soon!
lol i feel a bit bad saying update, i'm demanding this constantly and walking the line lol!
but do ur best! hehe

Date: 06-26-06 - 01:10 pm Title: 13. Time
renegade???? update! update!

Date: 06-26-06 - 12:56 pm Title: 13. Time
things are...**exhales** certainly heating up. that was wow... umm... not sure i can focues on work now.

Date: 06-26-06 - 12:51 pm Title: 13. Time
*wipes misty eyes* Poetry indeed. I can't tell you enough how much I enjoy your fiction. Full of emotion and detail and tiny little nuances that pull the reader in and won't let go. Brilliant! (Betchyer tired of hearing that.) :P

Date: 06-26-06 - 11:39 am Title: 13. Time
*sigh* Oh God. I laughed, even got a little teary at this chapter. I'm in heaven, I think. It was *fantastic*. I don't have any other words, really, you've left me speechless. (And that's not easy to do.) So I'll just say continue soon! :) I can't wait to see what happens next! :D