

Date: 06-23-06 - 01:16 am Title: 11. It Burns
yay! they're finally sorting things out. woohoooo. Awww Prita is soo adorable! more please!
TAM OUT!

Date: 06-23-06 - 12:04 am Title: 11. It Burns
*sigh* Oh my God, I think I've died and gone to heaven. Seriously. Fantastic chapter. Each new one is even better than the one before it. And on that note, I will be anxiously awaiting the next one. I need my fix, lol.

Date: 06-22-06 - 09:53 pm Title: 11. It Burns
Two in one day again? Oh you are too generous. Loved it as always and anxiously await the next.

Date: 06-22-06 - 09:45 pm Title: 11. It Burns
OMG!!!! that was perfect. i would love for you to delve into the adventurous duo's outing, if its possible. dinner dates are usually a good thing. eeek, i'm so excited at how frequent the updates are (and long chapters!!!) baby prita is soooo cute! first kiss scene? it was something i could totally picture happening

Date: 06-22-06 - 07:48 pm Title: 11. It Burns
YES!!! Finally, they're making progress. My heart was beating like theirs when I was reading the greenhouse scene. Just beautiful. The talk Logan had w/ Jean was nice to. I just want to take Prita home w/ me. She's so adorable!
Looking forward to the date! Great chapter!

Date: 06-22-06 - 02:05 pm Title: 10. Dance
AMAZING! I love your writing style and grasp on these characters so much. I read your other two stories because of how much I liked this one and I adore them. Thank you so much for another great chapter! Can't Wait for the rest. I almost wish it would never end but at the same time I can't wait to see how it will end.

Date: 06-22-06 - 12:29 pm Title: 10. Dance
You really have a way of leaving an audience in suspense! Logan strikes me as a Johnny Cash and Patsy Cline fan, I can totally see that. It's funny the traits we attach to fictional characters, isn't it? And yes, I can see Ororo liking old blues, too, especially Aretha, maybe even a dab of Chaka Khan.

Date: 06-22-06 - 10:53 am Title: 10. Dance
things wil never just be easy will they!
i wonder if jean will come back in this story, drama drama drama lol!

Date: 06-22-06 - 09:24 am Title: 10. Dance
wat!! they ran away????!!! no way! the cliffies in this are real good. Another amazing chapter. Btw real happy that you updated so fast! yay!
I reckon ororo's in the wrong this time.
next chapter plz
TAM OUT!

Date: 06-22-06 - 09:09 am Title: 10. Dance
I loved the dance. So sweet and comfortable. When will these two get it together? Why are Remy and Marie runnning off? Can't wait to find out! :)

Date: 06-22-06 - 09:06 am Title: 10. Dance
I'm gonna kill Rogue and Gambit, lol. Can't they see Logan's trying to make a move, here? Seriously, though, this was a fabulous chapter. Loved the dance. *sigh* More moments like that would be awesome. Also loved Ororo's scene with Kitty. And as usual, your descriptions and your narrative are so good that I get sucked into the story and forget about everything else. Continue soon! I so love this! :D

Date: 06-22-06 - 08:51 am Title: 10. Dance
Damn that Cajun!
Ok, more.

Date: 06-22-06 - 07:02 am Title: 10. Dance
Awww, the dance was beautiful. Too bad Remy came to interrupt. Damn lunch time LOL I liked it a lot that Logan didn't push her, didn't try to kiss her or anything like that. Just dance. Leaving her her space. Those accidental touches during their work on the schedules... mmmhh :) I wonder if they really were that accidental from his side, heh.
So Logan had some plans for the evening but something got in the way... damn. Do we get to know what he had planned even though he aparantly had no chance to get it through?

Date: 06-21-06 - 09:39 pm Title: 9. Best Laid Plans
omg what happened?1!?! the ro/gambit fly scene was so cool! friendship is beautiful. glad to hear the resident cajun is ga-ga over rogue :-D

Date: 06-21-06 - 03:28 pm Title: 9. Best Laid Plans
I like the way you write Lofan in this story. He is so honest about his feeling for Ro and yet still himself.