Wow! This chapter sure gave me some tramatizing flashbacks of my mom grabbing me by the 'fro to see if i greazed my scalp. I love the playful banter you created between Ororo and her family. Its so fun to read and very down to earth.

And then there is Logan...Yum. The dude has good taste if 'Ro's Maxewell CD caught his eye. Hopefully they both can teach each other "A Little Sumthin' Sumthin' " LOL

Author's Response: As soon as I mentioned grease, I knew the sistas would be out in force giving me the riot act for airing the dirty little secrets of hair care! (grins) Have you ever wondered why with her long, mostly straight hair, you've never seen her tying that mess up at night??? Ororo's family in that scene could be my family, albeit remotely...my aunts all act like Ruth. The song I had in mind was "Suite Lady." Depending on which scene I end up plugging it into... The first two lines of that song set me swaying in my seat.

Holy crap. 1-6 is the same thing that my mother talks at me about all the time. At least I think that's what she's saying, once I hear church and man my higher brain functions stop.

I heart Logan. He's adorable.

Author's Response: heh. higher brain functions...mine don't work that often, anyway. Glad you liked Logan.

Logan is awsome! I'm already totally smitten. One thing that you do best are those accidental touches. I love those; they turn me into a giddy schoolgirl.

Author's Response: Get giddy with it! glad you enjoyed it. I like Logan, too.

Sooo...Logan's the HOT mechanic! LOL Nice update, waiting for mre!

Author's Response: Yeah, that Logan's a hottie, isn't he? I'm tempted to have Ororo tell him "Honey, I've got some things you can fix!"

i luv the positions that logan and ororo have in this fanfic, more please

Author's Response: More is coming, once I write more. I am still juggling ideas for Wounded.

Yay! Logan's in the picture and he's a mechanic. Gotta always keep a good one at your finger tips. Can't wait to see when Logan and Ororo get together. Love the ketchup soup part. *sigh* those were the days. lol

Author's Response: Now see, not everyone's gonna know what I'm talking about with ketchup soup! I was dying to throw him in there somewhere.

Wonder Woman eh?! Nice to see you slip her (an' the others) in there too. Don't know when I'll get to an update for my own 'Wondy-Bats' story (Once Upon A Time...), but hope to get her to make atleast one appearance there too.

Still, when's Logan showing up?

BW

Author's Response: Logan'll show up, he's on his way through rush hour traffic, any minute now... I've been watching for updates to Once Upon a Time, too, by the way. But you updated Y&T, so you are forgiven for lagging a little on the other. That X-ed update was neat, too. Good imagery on Ororo, being made from the weather patterns around her.

I love fics where the characters are powerless. It gives writers so much more room to explore the personalities of the character in my opinion and show a million different sides to them. :) Excellent beginning.

Author's Response: I do too. That's why I loved Odalisque so much, and that other one where Ororo and Logan are teens. Ororo is going to be slightly less formal in this one, and more urban and down-to-business, I think. We'll see. Thanks for visiting!