Just read this, and even though it is progressing a (little) slow, I am thoroughly enjoying the way you are fleshing out the characters.

As for my niggle, you can solve that by faster updates.

;)

BW

Author's Response: Hey, they need some fleshing out. Or, I could just have 'Ro and Logan look each other in the eye and descend upon each other in a flurry of flying clothes and skip the plot...never mind. That's not me. That's next chapter. Watch for it.

Ok, all caught up and Mmmmm, this is RoLo yumminess. I have this stupid look on my face and a lopsided smile as I'm picturing Logan and Whooo. (Let's just say you should pity my boyfriend, 'cuz ain't no way he's topping that anytime soon). *Ahem* Well, anyway, I hope to read more very very soon.

Author's Response: Just uploaded another chapter...yeah, Logan makes my husband look like dog meat. Moving on...

Poor 'Ro! She would embarrass herself when Logan shows up. LMAO at that too! I can't wait until this ball happens. I hope 'Ro finally gives Emma, Jean and Selene a piece of her mind. Thanks for the update. :)


Author's Response: Well, she's still gotta keep that job, so she can't give 'em too big a piece, but some comeuppance would be nice. I've taken equally idiotic falls over chairs during my life, I was dying to use that.

ok im hooked, and want more, update soon dude, im dyin here! Love how they meet up again and ororos facination with wonder woman. Hopefully logan goes to the ball, im curious to find see if jean and emma have big roles in the ball.

good luck with ur next chapter
TAM OUT!


Author's Response: sorry it took me so long to say thanks...I appreciate the review.

Okay, you have the awful habit of posting in the dead of night. And of course at 3:00am when i know my ass is suppose to be in bed, i'm turning down sleep to read the next chapter of your fic. Dayum, you got me. Hook, line and sinker.

I loved the akward moments between Logan and Ororo is was sooo sweet. I hope he accepts the invite to go to the halloween party. I'm curious to see what Logan's costume would be. I can just take a guess what Ororo "Wonder Woman" Munroe's will be.

I'm off to bed to catch about 2hrs of sleep before i'm up again. But dammit it was well worth it!

Author's Response: Time zone differences are a pain in the hiney, aren't they? I live on Pacific time, which means my friends on the east coast are three hours ahead of me and snoring by the time I get anything uploaded after dinner or after my kids go to bed. Yeah, he's accepting that invite...whoa, nelly.

I had to smile at the scenes at Ro's moms'. Especially at all the supplies Ro brought back home. That sounds sooo familiar LOL My mom and grandma have a secret stash of stuff I "so totally need" hidden somewhere and whenever I visit I leave with more than I came with LOL
OMG, Emma and company... gah. I so felt with Ro. Her nice desktop icon made me smile. I have quite a few of those, too :D
I really enjoyed the scene between Ro and Logan. So much chemistry already :) Loved how both of them tried to steal as much glances at the other as possible. Can't wait to find out where this is going. With the two of them I mean. Now that the car is fixed where/how will they meet again?

Author's Response: Will they meet again? Most definitely. Can't keep two people that curious about each other apart. I just can't. Even if I had to get desperate and have them meet at the laundromat or grocery store, I would have. But read chapter four. Emma's a real pip, isn't she??? Ro's mom and aunt were based on my family, too.

Oh, I really like this new story of yours so far! Just started reading. Can't wait to find out what's Logan's place in it :)
Love how you tied in other familiar characters into this setup. This is gonna be interesting. No wait, it already is, heh. You've got a lot of inspiration lately! Keep it up! I'll be reading :)

Author's Response: I don't know why I'm having as much fun with this one as I am...just an urge to write something fluffy. Please do read, I enjoy when you do!