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Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-06 - 10:46 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
can leave it like that
they just got together
hmmm fight scene???? havent had to many of them in this fic
i dont want logan to retire...
so many thoughts... update soon!

Reviewer: Annonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-06 - 10:14 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder

Great story you've got going here! Can't wait to hear more.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-06 - 08:18 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder

Gawdfuckindamnit, Gainee!! Sooooo close! **shrieks in frustration** UPDATE!! SOON!! I will fly over seas and track you down if you don't!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-06 - 08:13 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Evil kitty laughter, indeed! That's just wrong! I need my RoLo fix! And we need Ororo to tell the poor guy she loves him!

...but this was brilliant. I have been waiting anxiously for this, and you delivered!

Reviewer: serial_charmer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-26-06 - 09:50 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Grief

ooo i REALLY love the pacing of this story. after 13 chapters, it's still just getting deeper and deeper. the wolverine being scared is an unexpected twist, but i really love that too. can't wait till the next chappie! write on! :)

Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-26-06 - 07:46 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Grief

wow, i've been on hoilday and only now had a chance to chatch up with all the stories i've missed.

wonderful chapters, youre still maintaining the chacters traits so well. i'm toatally engrossed

wil ro and lo ever get past the friend stage?? casnt wait for more updates

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-26-06 - 04:37 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Grief

Waaaah! Whaaat?! O_O

*dies*

Angst, pain, angst, pain. 'Tis like a drug.

I don't know whether to love you or hate you. (Love, most probably.) But I bow down to you and how you've brilliantly captured their emotions.

Reviewer: KrystalNic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 11:45 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Grief

Maybe Rolo in this story should not be together in this story......
I just have this feeling....

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 11:45 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Grief

This was sooooooooo beautiful, Gainee. I totally forgive you for making me wait these past few days for this. Wow. That's all I can say.

Well, that and that Logan and Ororo both have so much depth here. I was worried that Charles was dead at the end of the last chapter, and I knew something was up with that little piece of foreshadowing that you left us, when Charles promised he would never leave her. But it still bowled me over when I read this chapter tonight, and it was so well done. I can't wait to see what you do next.

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 11:30 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Grief

wow, wat a crucial chapter, and logan's declaration at the end at the end was a complete surprise...i loved xavier's letter to logan, it was so sweet...can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 09:02 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Grief

I will only admit this once, this made me cry. I now hate you. hurry up with the next chapter.

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 08:30 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Grief

Oh my God! That chapter....I'm literally crying, here. You did such a fabulous job, hun. It was perfect. And Xavier's letter to Logan...well, that would be why I'm such a wreck right now. It was perfectly in character and so beautifully written. The whole chapter was one beautiful angsty ride. Can't wait for your next one. :)

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 07:41 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Grief

A very emotionally charged chapter. Of the two of them I would have seen Ororo saying she'd take Charles seat as the one at home offering comfort, control and solace as teh X-Men went on missions. Apparently this is what you meant by out of character. But I trust you, so keep going girl, and I'll be with you the whole way. ;) Good stuff as always.

Reviewer: Voli23 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 07:28 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Grief

Whoo! Gah! You know how to cook up a good story!!! Excellent.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 06:49 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Grief

How...but...omg...the pain...nooooo...oooo...Rolo is the bestest. Scoot is a futtbucker for some reason to me. Arrg he gets away to much with usin poor Rory like that. Drop a anvil on him =P

So good, absolutely flawless. Want more, alot more!

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