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Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-17-06 - 03:49 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Body Heat

Good grief! You went and flipped it on me, that was something I never expected. Sure, it was bound to come out in the wash that Logan and Jean had an affair eventually, but Ororo and Scott...wow.

This was so great. As soon as I read "hotel room" that totally caught my attention. I hope Ororo and Logan get their act together!

Reviewer: Jamie B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-17-06 - 02:09 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Body Heat

This rocks! Everything is so confusing and sexual between the four of them. I just know Jean is up to no good, but I actually felt kinda bad for her (please don't hate me). Ro's all alone for now, but Logan will find his way back to her. I hope a coupla days passes before the next chapter!!

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-17-06 - 01:20 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Body Heat

Oh God! Are you *trying* to kill me? I seriously think you are. And it's working! Geezus, what a chapter. I cannot wait for the next one! Continue soon! :D

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-17-06 - 09:27 am Title: Chapter Eleven: Body Heat

What in hell was she going to do with Scott and Jean’s little mind games in the mean time? Huh? Wasn't she playing a bit of a get back at Jean teenage game herself? As much as that chapter pissed me off, I loved it because it kept the characters human and real. Mistakes are made, often in the heat of turmoil yours or otherwise and the sad truth of it is we are often helpless to stop the outcome even when we plan the action. ;) Good job as always. Full of vivid imagery and emotion. I read the chapter 2 times just to make sure I didn't miss anything because your stories have layers to them. Layers to savor. Mmmmm. Please, please, post the next part of this chapter soon. I'm dying here.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-17-06 - 07:03 am Title: Chapter Eleven: Body Heat

What!?! Scott was jealous the night he acted like an ass? I want my RoLo, but I have to admit that 'Ro and Scott are HOT! I hope Scott finally got his itch scratched and leaves 'Ro alone. I know that Scott and 'Ro slept together, but why did Logan have to screw Jean in Ororo's bed? That was just tacky! Someone needs to put Jean in her place.

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-12-06 - 03:36 am Title: Chapter Ten: What the hell?

This is getting better and better :D
Funny to see Jeannie's mind-peeping backfiring at her :D Hopefully that'll show her, heh.
Scooter in a speedo?! That reminded me of Homer Simpson LOL "Think unsexy thoughts, think unsexy thoughts..."
He smelled her arousal, felt her breath quicken, heard her heart beating faster... and still held himself in check?! OMG :D I wonder what it's gonna be like when they finally give in to their feelings! *starts swaying back and forth on her seat excitedly*

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-12-06 - 01:59 am Title: Chapter Ten: What the hell?

*sigh*

His last thought was that he wanted to fall asleep that way forever.

Aw. They're both so stubborn in a good way. Friendship first, always. I love this story.

PS. Jeannie being jealous. That's a first.

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-11-06 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter Ten: What the hell?

This is a really interesting story so far. I like seeing this different side of Ororo and Logan. No matter how you view them, I still love them together.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-11-06 - 03:58 pm Title: Chapter Ten: What the hell?

Augh! You ended it there?!? I am itching here, woman! The suspense is killing me. Painfully. Update soon!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-11-06 - 12:46 pm Title: Chapter Ten: What the hell?

I keep thinking it can't get any better, then you prove me wrong!

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-11-06 - 12:31 pm Title: Chapter Ten: What the hell?

Wow. This story just keeps getting better. I love that Logan is having an awakening. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-11-06 - 12:02 pm Title: Chapter Ten: What the hell?

Awesome chapter, hun! Loved the way he can't get his mind off her, and doesn't know she can't get hers off him. :D And Scooter in a speedo? Hee! Good thing I wasn't drinking anything, lol. That part cracked me up! Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! :D

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-11-06 - 04:14 am Title: Chapter Nine: Erik

More, more, more! Please :D
So Ro got the same ideas... good! :D But OMG that massage! How on earth did they manage to finish it without falling upon each other LOL OMG :D Both of them are way too strong-minded for their own good :) Loved the bits of jealousy creeping into Ro's thoughts. I wonder if Logan smelled it on her...
Loved the private dinner with Charles. I wonder what he sees looking at his two X-Men in quiet moments like this. I'm glad he gave them permisson/the order to put and end to Magneto if need will be. A very hard choice to make, but a necessary one nevertheless.
Soooo... it's Ro's turn to get a massage now, right? :D

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-10-06 - 02:05 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Erik

Awesome chapter! So worth the wait! So emotional and sexy and just...*sigh* Perfect. Great job, hun! Can't wait for more, so continue soon! :D

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-10-06 - 01:35 pm Title: Chapter Nine: Erik

There are So many lines being walked in this story. I love the intricacies (sp) of it all.

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