MORE!!!!!!! LOl good chapter enjoyed it; Can't wait to read more. Good development of the characters to.

This update was far too long in the waiting, Gainee. Don't do that again. I neeeeeed this story. Need it! This chapter was an emotional gut punch and I loved every word of it. Gimme more!

awesome.

This is my first ever fiction -that I can commit to my memory now- of Ororo/Logan. A friend of mine, who's a great fan of this 'ship has got me converted from being an unofficial Jean/Scott to this 'ship. Of course, after she proved to me that this 'ship is great, compliments by your fiction. I'm a Dramione (Harry Potter) fan, and seldom read other fandoms unless I know the author. And I'm quite picky with the ones I read. I can only be ever patient on reading some... child-like written pieces.

I actually liked the plunge into the battefield- or rather, the battlefield start-out of the chapter. I just love such scenes. Since it's my first time to review one of your fics, I think I can have the priviledge of elaborating what I mean.

How you write is simply very picturesque, vivid- the actions, the emotions, and minute alterations in such masques. It helped the story developed further, and I believe, that these little "things" are often forgotten by some writers. (I'm not talking about the technique because it's different.) And it's those little things that make the story worth-while to read for anyone. I suddenly was able to view a part of their soul, and that's saying a lot since I'm just a newbie here.

I liked every chapter, and there was a fluid flow in between chapters. And, my heart fell out to Storm. So sad. Angst. You're really getting me into your story!

Haha. Er, I have to go since I have my chem lq tomorrow which I haven't started studying. I'll read the next chapters when I find the time. :)

~chaste.aeon@gmail.com

Coool, at least one of them knows whats goin on. I can't wait to see what's goin on next.

Oh yea, Scott needs a swift kick in the nuts. That should dislodge whatever crawled up his ass and died there.

You know this but I love the way you write stories. I love your variety in the way you approach these characters in every story you write. Can't wait for more!

Oooh. Things are about to get *very* interesting. :D Fabulous chapter, hun! Loved! Can't wait to see what happens next! Continue soon! :D

...or a lot of good could come from this. I love that last line.

“But I cannot condone harming him until his memory returns.”

That's funny coming from Ororo, since she already kicked his ass and handed it to the old man! But still, this was good. They interactions and dynamics between each character were great. Jean's not my favorite character in this story, but that's okay, she makes a good fly in the ointment. Ororo with Scooter? Too much! Loved it. "touched some interesting places..." Sometimes I wish Marvel would have moved Scott and Ororo together in Ultimates while Jean was playing her usual games.

Keep this going a while. It's really good.