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Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-04-06 - 08:11 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Release

that was a good chapter...i feel so sorry for ororo...the guilt she musta felt when erik called her windrider must have been unbearable...and to walk into her house with everyone givin' her dirty looks musta added more hurt...good stuff, i just hope ororo will accept logan's offer to help her heal

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-03-06 - 07:51 am Title: Chapter Seven: Release

Whoa, what's with Scott? Geez LOL Sure, Ro's behaviour wasn't really the best but still... She always was there for everyone who ever needed her, neclecting herself and her needs in the process. A little bit understanding on their part now would be nice.
Poor Ro, loving and hating someone at the same time, not knowing what to make of it. Especially since Erik doesn't seem to remember much. if not anything. Well, anything expect his Windrider that is.
I'm glad Logan is there for her. Sure he's hurt but she's his best friend. How could he ever be mad at her seing her devastated and confused like that. Good thing she realized that she really needs help now. That both of them need help. Each other's. It's even better that she said it out aloud, admitting it. To Logan and ,most importantly, to herself.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-03-06 - 07:27 am Title: Chapter Six: Turmoil

I really don't like to see Ro retreating from everyone including Logan. Especially since it hurts him so much. It might feel like a betrayal on his part to tell the team about Ro's condition but I think it was the right thing to do. He's just too worried to not let the others know about it. Gawd, sentinels. Pain in the ass :) Logan's first mission after quite some time and it sends him right back to the medlab. Great, ugh. If Ro comes back in time to see him in this state she's gonna feel pretty guilty about running away I guess.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-02-06 - 03:18 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Release

I understand that everyone was upset with 'Ro for not being there, but they were a bit too harsh IMO. Scott's comments were the worst. 'Ro spends most of her time tending to the needs of others. She deserves the right to have some sort of "Release". :)

Although I do agree that she was being childish, that's how she felt she needed to cope with things at the time. Then to have everyone sitting in her home like they belonged there and like they care about Logan the way she does was kind of self-righteous on their part.

It was an excellent update though. It shocked me that Erik woke up and remembered his "Windrider". Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-02-06 - 03:10 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Release

hmmm, next chapter??

i hope a few more people beside logan give Ororo some slack, well even logan.
'where were u?' he didnt have to go on the mission, and it's wasnt Ororo's responsibility to be there ever second, i mean she has done a hell of a lo for him with his recovery. and scott i seriously coulda thumped him

i got a selfish vibe from that chapter, from almost everyone, not so much Ororo iromically even with the begining of the chapter running out, just a lack of compassion

BUT! as you can see i've gone into a full rant lol, reflecting just how much i enjoyed and became absorbed in this chapter LOL

Reviewer: tamazi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-02-06 - 01:11 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Release

oh my god!! ororo can be a bitch!! :O!!! poor logan and damn can scotty be harsh. i think the world turned upside down coz even logan was acting nice!

This aint a flame btw, i reckon u wrote the characters very well even tho they acted differently....if that makes sense :D

Altho i still reckon ororo needs a good whack up the head! And someone give scotty an award, he swore!!! I bet thats why psyclocke was so stunned :D

Next chapter please! want more! update soon
TAM OUT!

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-02-06 - 12:23 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Release

Thank you. You just made my day. :D

Reviewer: ROLO__LOVER1979 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-02-06 - 12:17 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Release

THAT WAS GOOD AND ERIK CALL HER MY WINDRIDER..

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-02-06 - 12:08 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Release

Oooh. Loved this. Loved Scott's attitude, surprisingly. And poor 'Ro and Logan. I'm addicted to this, though, just like TS, so i will be impatiently waiting for you to continue. You're a fantastic writer. I don't think I tell you that often enough.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-01-06 - 04:25 pm Title: Chapter Six: Turmoil

**Is in awe** Brilliant story telling as always. I am enraptured completely by this story. It is one of, if not now, my all time favorites.

Reviewer: tamazi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-01-06 - 02:07 pm Title: Chapter Six: Turmoil

ooooo more!!! that was soo good, what happened to logan????? more please :D

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-01-06 - 12:14 pm Title: Chapter Six: Turmoil

This was an amazing chapter. You reminded me that this is more of a friendship fic than the usual kind dripping with romps that are so popular on this site. Yeah, hard not to be frustrated with Ororo and Logan each getting some on the side, but at least they both are. That makes it okay, doesn't it? :-)

Love the action. Love the last line. Love the dialogue and the image of 'Ro driving to beat the band. Good work.

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-01-06 - 11:53 am Title: Chapter Six: Turmoil

naughty naughty. i think i like your storm because she's real. Her calm collect exterior makes sense. Awww... Logie's all worried. Again, he had a lot of depth as well.

Reviewer: RO__LOVER79 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-01-06 - 10:35 am Title: Chapter Six: Turmoil

STROM GO A BOOTY CALL ON THE SIDE...YOU GO GIRL...

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-01-06 - 09:15 am Title: Chapter Six: Turmoil

Oh God! Okay, you have to update, like soon. Or I'm gonna go crazy from the waiting. Loved this chapter. Storm's problems and Logan getting hurt on the mission...boy, she's gonna be pissed and probably guilty as hell that she wasn't there. I can't *wait*! Bring on the angst! :D

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