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Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-01-06 - 08:42 am Title: Chapter Six: Turmoil

i love it how both wolverine and storm are vunerable but at the same time independant, AND at the same time rely on each other, it incorporates thier character traits so well!
both are victims but refuse to be if you understand. and where as wolverine is being injured physically and needs help Ororo is being injured emotionally. this would usually be the other way around, however you've picked up on the fact that logan has been emotionally hurt before and can deal with it more so than strm, and vis versa for the physical pain, storm is used to dealing with it, where as logans not.

very very intresting, i'm loving the story

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-29-06 - 02:32 pm Title: Chatper Five: History

It's even more understandable now that she lost it the second she saw Magneto again. And that bastard used to be a father figure for her! Must feel like a total betrayal. Not only did he turn against her/them, he also attacked her and tried to kill her best friend...
I hope she'll be able to vent a bit now to get all of this frustration out of her system. And I'm glad she still wanted Logan to come with her :)

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-29-06 - 01:30 pm Title: Chatper Five: History

that was a poignant chappy!!! I loved the intro to her dark side/ wild side!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-29-06 - 11:22 am Title: Chatper Five: History

It always amazes me that you create all this depth out of the movieverse characters. Of course the scene at the front door with Ororo saying goodbye to Magneto made me tear up. And of course it's equally heartrending to see Logan hurting for Ororo and being afraid for her in the wake of everything he's been through. This was SO GOOD.

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-29-06 - 09:04 am Title: Chatper Five: History

Ooooh. This is the reason I'm addicted to this story. Addicted, I tell you. I get all giddy when I see a new chapter's been added. And with all the stuff going on in my life right now, your stories are a welcome distraction from reality. I can get totally absorbed and forget everything else for a while. Thank you so much for that, especially over the last few days. You have no idea how much you help by updating. :)

Reviewer: ROLO__LOVER1979 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-29-06 - 06:46 am Title: Chatper Five: History

i love it she a car racer...loving it

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-29-06 - 04:58 am Title: Chapter Four: Lunar Pull

Wow, that was unexpected, but I loved it. 'Ro beating Mags into a bloody pulp, who'duthunk?

Awesome.

Reviewer: Voli23 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-29-06 - 12:33 am Title: Chapter Four: Lunar Pull

OMG! Please update asap! Good different storyline.

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-28-06 - 11:26 pm Title: Chapter Four: Lunar Pull

more more more...i'm hooked.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-28-06 - 06:50 pm Title: Chapter Four: Lunar Pull

Whoo hoo!! I steamed the monitor with my breathing I was so close. Damn good chapter!! **whisltes**

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-28-06 - 03:09 pm Title: Chapter Four: Lunar Pull

Wow! Just wow! The bloody it was, Ro really needed this. She needed to hurt him. With her own hands. Feel, that this time around she was indeed doing something. A simple lightning bolt up his ass never would have accomplished what her little beating did. She needed to get her hands dirty instead of just watching the show. Good thing though Logan managed to pull her away in time.
I'm anxiously awaiting your next update! This story is fantastic, I'm enjoying it a lot! :)

Reviewer: tamazi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-28-06 - 03:01 pm Title: Chapter Four: Lunar Pull

interesting turn of events, both of them r gettin hurt... perfect start for a relationship :P jk, update soon gainee

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-28-06 - 02:32 pm Title: Chapter Four: Lunar Pull

Wow. 'Ro was scary, but I loved that the beating was so personal. Magneto deserved that and so much more. It's nice to see the RoLo friendship in-depth. Thanks for the update! :)

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-28-06 - 01:50 pm Title: Chapter Four: Lunar Pull

Powerful. Imagine what it must have been like for Logan to stumble inside the house to see her like that? I can't wait to see the resulting conversation between Ororo and Logan now, I bet it will be earth-shaking! I just like that Logan is reading between the lines and seeing that Ororo's going through a hard time, it's nice to see him as someone really insightful. He always has been.

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-28-06 - 01:32 pm Title: Chapter Four: Lunar Pull

Boy, that kicked ass. When you said Lunar Pull, you weren't kidding, lol. Loved every letter of this. :D And I so can't wait for the next chapter. Continue soon! Pretty, pretty please? :)

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