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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-25-06 - 05:10 am Title: Chapter Two: My Best Friend

I so love the banter between them! "Where did you go?" - "Canada. With you." - "Was I dressed?" LOL, so good!
Very deep and moving when they learned about his past together. Especially Ro's reaction when she saw what they did to him on the photos. Loved how she got him out of the medlab the instant Jean and Hank mentioned that they still had some tests to do. They can be happy Ro didn't fry their asses for that! The interaction between Ro and Logan is fantastic, I so can't wait to read more! :)

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-25-06 - 12:32 am Title: Chapter Two: My Best Friend

Heartbreaking stuff. You've given me new reasons to love both these characters as much as I do. That's what I hate about Marvel; they write a dumb new comic about Logan's origins that doesn't ring true at all after he gets his memories back, and they send Ororo, his best friend that he has feelings for, all the way to Africa. That was the worst thing they could have done. This story falls easily under the category of "what they should have done in the first place with these two." Beautiful.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-24-06 - 07:46 pm Title: Chapter Two: My Best Friend

OMG, this is chalk full of so much goodness, I can't even type. My eyes are all squinty from my stupid grin.

Best parts are the entire memory sequence, so natural, so right.
"Yer right so much, it’s fuckin’ sick" Perfect Logan line.
And 'Ro taking him from the lab. Perfect.

This is by far some of the best writing I have ever read--fanfic or otherwise. **claps and whistles**

~Your devoted fan!

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-24-06 - 10:33 am Title: Chapter Two: My Best Friend

*sigh* Oh thank God the site is working again so I can read this. I was about to have an anxiety attack. Fabulous chapter. Love the banter between them, and the characterization and dialogue is dead perfect. Also love the way Storm handled Jean and Hank. Can't wait for the next chapter, so continue soon. :D And now I'm gonna go check out To Survive. :D

Reviewer: JamesGirl0612 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-24-06 - 01:12 am Title: Chapter One: Rough Beginnings

You are just on a roll, aren't you. Your latest two stories are just blowing my mind. I haven't even reviewed "To Survive", I've just been trying to catch up. I have been off line for about a week, so now my nights have been filled with playing catch-up...and oh what a glorious game it is. You are just amazing. You capture so much emotion in your writing, once you start reading, you just can't stop. I am on the edge of my seat. Two thumbs waaaayyyy up. This is definately going on my favorites list. :::wink:::

Reviewer: Rhapsod81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-23-06 - 08:24 pm Title: Chapter One: Rough Beginnings

You've really got Johnny Cash on the brain!!

Reviewer: Jasmine Shigeru Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-23-06 - 04:43 pm Title: Chapter One: Rough Beginnings

This is good. I'm loving it. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-23-06 - 03:03 pm Title: Chapter One: Rough Beginnings

one question...is he short? lol another great story..um next time can you do something a little bit more lighthearted? :)

Reviewer: tamazi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-23-06 - 01:08 pm Title: Chapter One: Rough Beginnings

aww, its soo *sniffle* sad :( but i like it :) more please!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-23-06 - 12:18 pm Title: Chapter One: Rough Beginnings

Weeee, another story! And whoa, what a start, you jumped right into the action.
Gawd, poor Wolvie. Damn that Magneto. I bet if Storm and him would cross ways again right now she would fry him to ashes right on the spot, without even blinking! How dare he hurt her best friend like that! And what a deep running friendship they have :) You described it wonderfully, it came across clearly in this first chapter.
Please update soon!

Reviewer: Kay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-23-06 - 11:30 am Title: Chapter One: Rough Beginnings

Love you and your stories as always! Thanks for gracing us with another one.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-23-06 - 11:01 am Title: Chapter One: Rough Beginnings

Wow. It's funny, your style and plot in this one almost make it feel like a sequel to Minarya's other wonderful story on this site. In the end of hers, Ororo and Logan go to Japan.

But in the meantime, this is great. I love the way you plunge us straight into the action in the first chapter. I always wondered why there weren't more fics written about Logan losing his adamantium, there were some great moments between him and Storm in the Wolverine series during that period. I can't wait to see more of this one, and (eventually) another chapter of Blackout!

Reviewer: Orogan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-23-06 - 10:17 am Title: Chapter One: Rough Beginnings

This was quite moving. The way that you presented this drew me in. It was as if I was right there with them and seeing everything first-hand. Excellent! Please continue.

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-23-06 - 10:10 am Title: Chapter One: Rough Beginnings

Oh God! Good thing I love angst. Damn, this is...just...*damn*. And I mean that in the best way possible, I promise. You're gonna be sorry you posted this while you're working on To Survive and Blackout, though, lol. You're *really* gonna have people bugging you to update now. :D And speaking of which, I can't *wait* for the next chapter of this, so continue soon. :D Please?

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-23-06 - 09:46 am Title: Chapter One: Rough Beginnings

Muse hog! *grin* Another wonderful story. Can't wait for mre.

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