

Date: 12-22-06 - 07:25 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Yeah, that's it.
Perfectly written. I swear I got teary-eyed while reading this.
Brilliant.

Date: 12-21-06 - 09:24 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
okay. sigh. where do i start? when ro died.... i won't say that i expected it, but from the note at the beginning of the chapter, i knew something big would happen, but now that i think back on it, the sentinels were like the scary monsters hovering in the background the whole time. but this chapter... so poignant, so emotional, so achingly but elegantly written. i think one of those first phrases sum up the mood perfectly: the description of the snow, "specks of white [that] clung like a frightened child." perfect. and now with magneto and mystique in the mix, i get the feeling that i can look forward to some ass-kicking and enraged-wolverine-smackdowns. i can only hope....

Date: 12-21-06 - 08:32 pm Title: Chapter One: Rough Beginnings
I didn't get to review the last couple of chapters, but let me say that you are a drama master. My my my. I am always in tears when I read your stories. Ro's death felt like a sudden kick in the stomach by a steel toed boot.
I'm wondering why the tin can targeted the boathouse twice. Was it particularly after Ororo or Logan? Guess we'll find out, huh?
The funeral was so tangible. Absolutely amazing.

Date: 12-21-06 - 12:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
You always make me cry with your fics. So sad, yet so beautiful. Why'd 'Ro have to die? I'm anxious to see everyone avenge 'Ro's death. Especially the brokenhearted Logan.

Date: 12-21-06 - 10:59 am Title: Chapter Twenty: Christmas
What? What? Dead? No CPR or the like to bring her back? Oh no! I amxiously await the next chapter.

Date: 12-21-06 - 10:11 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
"She didn’t want to be put into the cold earth, alone and confined. Logan had promised her – promised he wouldn’t put her in the dark."
I think my heart droped right there. So touching. And fitting. This is agreat, gainee. Logan's heartache is palpable and the bitterness in him so heartbreaking. **claps wildly**

Date: 12-21-06 - 10:07 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
OMG... y did u have to kill her!!!! *tears*

Date: 12-21-06 - 09:43 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Damn, I need a break... my eyes are blurry, tears still runnin' *sniffs* It's so sad to see her gone. It's even sadder to see Logan like this. He's lost everything with her.

Date: 12-21-06 - 08:45 am Title: Chapter Twenty: Christmas
OMG, what?! AH! Please no!
I was enjoying the peaceful Christmas scene, your warning at the beginning long forgotten, when suddenly BOOM! GAH! OMG!
Update soon, I need to know what's next! omg...

Date: 12-21-06 - 08:40 am Title: Chapter Twenty: Christmas
I am not normally a violent person and I find myself changing my opinion. This had better not be over!!!

Date: 12-21-06 - 07:56 am Title: Chapter Twenty: Christmas
damn it, gainee. I am going to hurt you...right after I hug you. Somehow, it's heartbreakingly fitting.

Date: 12-21-06 - 12:56 am Title: Chapter Twenty: Christmas
Aw, bugger.
*sigh* But it was a really nice Christmas. Very good descriptions and everything.

Date: 12-21-06 - 12:01 am Title: Chapter Twenty: Christmas
Talk about dropping a bomb. Christmas morning was so sweet and happy and then everything's shot to hell and Ororo's dead. Dead.
I couldn't do anything but blink stupified at the end. I was speechless. Excellent.
Don't leave us hanging with an ending like that.

Date: 12-20-06 - 11:38 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Christmas
*shakes Gainee like a ragdoll*
Don't leave it like this! Are trying to kill me? *drops Gainee and grasps chest* Darn you and your cliffies!
Great as always!

Date: 12-20-06 - 09:52 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Christmas
*sigh* Here we go, NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! You bring her back and you bring her back this instant! LoL Great job :-).