

Date: 12-20-06 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Christmas
Okay. You almost made me spit out my ice cream in shock and a coronary. I had to hit "back" with my browser and make sure the story didn't say "completed" yet. Whaddya mean, DEAD??????
...mind you, well written as always, great dialogue, characterizations, blah blah blah. STILL...
GAH!!!! Darn it, Gainee!!
Hmmph. You better update this soon...grrrr, snort, grumble...please???

Date: 12-17-06 - 10:52 am Title: Chapter Nineteen: Old Foes
Loved Mystique! And damn, I'm relieved Ro's gonna be okay. For a sec I was worried to no end here, phew :)

Date: 12-17-06 - 10:27 am Title: Chapter Eighteen: Slowing Down
I loved the talk between them on the porch.
And Logan's shopping trip with Betsy was great LOL Jean needs negative attention? LOL LOL! omg...
Ooooh, what did the shop owner show them? It sounds goooood! :)

Date: 12-03-06 - 09:55 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Old Foes
Ya just gotta love Storm. What a woman. Poor Logan I hope his heart doesn't pop open with the worry.

Date: 12-01-06 - 01:58 am Title: Chapter Nineteen: Old Foes
Wow. Talk about a major blow, man. You got me all teary-eyed there.
I've made up my mind. You should've been the scriptwriter for ALL the X-Men movies. You're absolutely brilliant.
Loving it. I was wrong about Mystique (thank God, 'cause I love that girl), but Ororo doing that was just right.

Date: 12-01-06 - 01:00 am Title: Chapter Nineteen: Old Foes
Oh, this was very good. I really like the interaction between the characters and the softer Logan. I look forward to the next Update.

Date: 11-30-06 - 11:48 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Old Foes
You do it every time. Perfect plot twist, characters lined up to interact in insightful ways with perfect timing and dialogue. Man, you're good. Raven was great. Good writers, I think, know that she's not just evil for evil's sake. You really see her intelligence here with the twisted loyalty.

Date: 11-30-06 - 09:26 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Old Foes
oh thank God. for a minute there at the end i thought you'd really done it...i'm glad ro's gonna pull through.
i can't tell you how excited i am that you're back! :D

Date: 11-30-06 - 12:05 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen: Old Foes
'Bout effin time you got back!! LOL.
Aside from that, tremendous as always. You are a divine gift, gainee. You certainly are.

Date: 11-08-06 - 08:42 am Title: Chapter Eighteen: Slowing Down
update?

Date: 10-18-06 - 10:53 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Slowing Down
Ooh you are wicked! What is it? What is it?! I anxiously await your next update.

Date: 10-18-06 - 08:40 pm Title: Chapter Twelve: Landslide
I thought for a minute this was where you had left off and I was about to scream! So happy there are more chapters. :) Off to read more.

Date: 10-18-06 - 12:57 pm Title: Chapter Two: My Best Friend
I am absolutely loving their friendship. It's really beautiful. *sniff-sniff*

Date: 10-11-06 - 07:15 am Title: Chapter Eighteen: Slowing Down
I could lavish you with endless praise...but I don't want you to get a swollen head. LOL. Just kidding--you're brilliant as always!! **hugs**

Date: 10-11-06 - 04:17 am Title: Chapter One: Rough Beginnings
i love this story and i know this is probably late in the game but i just finished reading it but scott and ro having sex really did it for me , i loved it any more of these two by any chance