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Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-10-06 - 02:28 am Title: Chapter Eighteen: Slowing Down

Oooh. Coolie.

So Jeannie snaps and Scott gets some male bonding in with Logan. All in a good day, eh?

Pity, I do love Jean. But she gets so... ugh sometimes..

Yay for the update! Here's a cupcake!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-09-06 - 07:28 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Slowing Down

I LOVE THIS. Love it, do you hear me? Betsy is easily one of your best characters that you write on a semi-regular basis, I want more of her. Her psychoanalysis of everyone is classic! How do you this???

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-09-06 - 05:04 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Slowing Down

Great chapter, hun! Glad to see an update, and I can't wait to find out what Logan's gonna get 'Ro. :D Update soon! :)

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-09-06 - 03:02 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen: Slowing Down

Yay! Loved this chapter. Poor Scott. The quiet time with 'Ro and Logan was nice. I adore Betsy, too. I can't wait to see what the jeweller has for Logan.

Reviewer: Noir_Libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-30-06 - 07:50 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen: Competing

She deserved it? Did I miss something? Ororo didn't sucker-punch Jean. She might've told her off, but thats not a punch. If I thought Jean had it coming when she had on Ororo's robe after her little tryst with Logan, I really think she's got it coming now. She needs someone to put her in her place.

I love my RoLo. That note Logan left for Ororo was so sweet. Great update.

Reviewer: charmer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-30-06 - 12:36 am Title: Chapter Seventeen: Competing

whoa, i've been spending so much time on LJ that i didn't even noticed you updated WTL! well what a wonderful surprise! loved it, as usual. the catfight was priceless (i even hate to admit that im glad jean got a good punch in.) logan's note at the end made my stomach flutter. aw :')

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-29-06 - 05:33 am Title: Chapter Seventeen: Competing

Ah, so it explodes. That Ororo-Jean thing you got is going quite nicely. I laughed when Jean punched Ororo. So very unlike that girl. Yeah, she'd move over to the dark side of breaking the law soon, with Ororo, Logan and (hopefully) Scott doing their illegal racing stints.

Good stuff. This is full of good stuff.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-29-06 - 02:08 am Title: Chapter Seventeen: Competing

Loved the catfight and the whole prison falling dead silent, heh :D It would be nice to see them getting over this though. Like Scott and Logan did rather easily.
“Why did we get dressed only to undress again?” LOL! I so love them together. The note he left her was perfect :D
This chapter left me smiling from ear to ear. What a nice way to start the day :D

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-06 - 11:37 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen: Competing

The chapter title alone had me salivating. I loved this. Great update, because we finally got inside Jean's head, and she called Ororo on her previous selfishness, too. That made me happy. The coldcocking in the prison cell and Logan's lecture after was hysterical, too. And the note at the end made me sigh with a big grin on my face. Good stuff, Gainee.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-06 - 08:35 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen: Competing

The end of this chapter was sooooo awesome. I did have a slight issue with "You'll know what the eye of a hurricane feels like." Why? Because, well, the eye of a hurricane is really tame. So, was she threatrneing her with calm? LOL. Great as always, lovey!

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-06 - 06:30 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen: Competing

Yowsa! That was freakin' HOT! I'm still fanning myself. They had a nice chat, too. Loved the note Logan left her. So sweet. Why did Jean have to sucker punch 'Ro? *shakes head*

Awesome update!

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-06 - 05:04 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen: Competing

Boy, Logan said it, lol. That was fuckin' hot. Heh. Loved this chapter, hun! And I'm waiting for the throw down between Jean and Storm. Jean is my least favorite X-Woman, especially in Movieverse. So every little dig Storm gets at her makes my day. :D Continue soon! I have to see what happens next! :D

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-06 - 04:07 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Smooth

*rolls eyes at Jean* Geez... she's driving me crazy, too! Gah... "I know how rough you can be" Gawd, that woman!
Loved how Logan handled the situation pefectly logan-like, heh :) MMmhhh... *drools*
Loved the race through the city! Especially that everyone enjoyed it immensely, everyone but Jean LOL LOL!
Are Scott and Jeannie still in ther PJs btw? *dies laughing*

Good luck with the move, Gainee! And with the wisdoms... *hugs*

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-06 - 03:47 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Heart and Body

Ohhhhhh yessss, soooo good :D RoLo goodness, mmmhhh *drools*

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-06 - 03:15 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder

OMG, finally!!! ... well, sort of LOL Dammit, who's disturbing now? Gah!

Loved the talk between Logan and Scott btw. So great!

And this:

“Hush,” he quieted her instantly. “I ain’t done yet.”
“Done with what?” she continued, heedless to the tug on her braids.
“Fallin’ for ya.”
“Oh.”

OMG, sooooo perfect! :D

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