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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-06 - 02:24 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Grief

Oh no :( *sniffs* That was very emotional, so sad.
And Charles' letter to Logan... damn, that made me cry.
Never would have thought Logan wanted to step back from active duty out on the field on his own free will. It really shows how much everything that happened recently actually affected him. But to take care of a family you have to be around. Especially around the youngest and weakest, the children. Protect the pack :) The kids most likely will feel a lot safer with him around all the time. I know I would :D

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-06 - 01:57 pm Title: Chapter Twelve: Landslide

She burned the bed :D Not just the mattress, but the whole damn thing! Loved that!
The talk between Logan and Betsy was great, too. Opened his eyes a bit more.
Logan jumping into Ro's bedroom, shrugging out of his clothes and lying into bed with her was so sweet. Loved that neither of them said a word, just falling back into routine.
But what's with Charles now? Ro in tears and unable to speak doesn't sound too good... :/

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-28-06 - 11:52 am Title: Chapter Eleven: Body Heat

Gah! Ugh... I really didn't see that one coming. Ro/Scott is not as disturbing as Logan/Jean here. Especially since it happened in Ro's house! Bah! Logan's complaining about Scooter's scent on Ro... well, what about her mattress smelling like who knows what now? Gah! They seriously need to get their act together. I'm glad they realized that something has changed between them and actually talked about it. Loved how they sat on the bed together feeling shitty, heh.

Reviewer: Cara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-06 - 06:34 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Smooth

hahahaha. 'oh, shit' is right. Great update. Jean is such a killjoy. Ruining everyone's adrenaline high because she can't handle a little speed.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-06 - 05:04 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Smooth

Hee hee hee. Loved that. All of it. Logan being jealous, Ororo being jealous, Jean being a killjoy, and the closing line. All great. It was worth the wait.

Reviewer: Aiesha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-06 - 12:37 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Smooth

WeeeeeHeeeeeee!!! It's back =) I loved the update and can we scare Jean more? THAT was FUN!!! I hope you can get another one out before you move but if not It's okay, you're still my new favorite author.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-06 - 12:21 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Smooth

That chapter was a lot of fun! Loved the car/bike chase. Loved Logan getting pissed at Jean. I find it hilarious that Scott can't seem to keep his gaze off of 'Ro for too long. Logan's tender musings about 'Ro were so sweet.

Great way to end it, too. "Oh, shit." indeed. LOL!

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-06 - 11:55 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Smooth

That was a fun ride! :D:D

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-06 - 11:47 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Smooth

Oh my God, I'm still laughing. This was a fantastic chapter, as always, hun. :D Loved the last scene! Hee. And arrested? Uh-oh. Can't wait to see how they get out of this one. Continue as soon as you can, and good luck with the move!

Reviewer: darkhorse2763 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-27-06 - 11:40 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Smooth

oh, gawd, now i remember why i love this story so much. high-speed chases, especially involving logan and ororo, have got to be the greatest, and it was friggin' awesome to see scott in on the fun. sadness over the pause in updates but i'll try to be patient!

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-22-06 - 02:12 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Heart and Body

Will you be updating this story. It is very good.! Please don't let it end here.

Reviewer: burnin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-30-06 - 12:07 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Heart and Body

*squee!*

Logan and 'Ro, finally! I loved the words you used in the last chapter: "I'm not yet done falling for you." Awesome.

Bobby is adorable.

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-29-06 - 02:08 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Heart and Body

*sigh* Fabulous chapter, hun! Loved it! And the end was perfect. :D Can't wait to see where things go next! (Yes, that *was* a hint. :P)

Reviewer: Kay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-29-06 - 01:56 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Heart and Body

*Huggles* That made my day. Thanks.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-29-06 - 01:01 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Heart and Body

Awww, that was sweet. Morning romps are great to wake up to. :D She told him she loved him, about damn time. :D This chapter made me smile. Great visuals as always yet full of emotion. **grins** Can't wait to see what you throw at the newly joined couple now.

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