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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03-17-15 - 03:20 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: Moving On

Damn!!! No words, still too busy crying over storms death and her and wolverines short romance together. I loved this story. I hope they meet in the afterlife.

Reviewer: inurinsama15 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-24-12 - 10:38 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

This story was so sad from beginning to end. I swear I cried the last chapter. I was hoping that Wolverine would get his adamantium back. I hoped that her relationship with Magneto would be fixed. I also hoped that she wasn't really dead (like last time). The last paragraph just tears my heart out. I love his devotion. Their devotion. I absolutely adore your work and how you can instill laughter, sorrow and enthusiasm for the next chapter. I like the slight W/J, C/S pairings in there. For some reason, Storm being Cyclops's love before Jean really does something for me. LOL I also like when Cyclops and Wolverine are friends. Is Magneto going to help out with the school? I hope. I'm going to check your stories and see if there is a sequel. I tried to submit this on the last chapter, but the site won't verify the security code.

Reviewer: Dispatcher 652 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-02-11 - 09:56 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: Moving On

I'm afraid that my words can not truly express how much I loved this story. I found it yesterday and just kept reading until the end. This story was simply amazing and one of the best RoLo stories I've read. I hope to read more from you because you truly have a gift for writing.

Reviewer: kayjin927 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05-23-08 - 09:57 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

A story to break our hearts once more. What's the value in that?

Reviewer: nemesisbecoming Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-27-07 - 11:17 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: Moving On

Yeah. Okay. Storm's still dead. I dunno. I gotta sleep on this or something. I mean, granted, not all stories are to have a happy and resolved ending. But still. Usually death in a story has a purpose or some sort of resolution or something. At least in my book. I dunno. Well-written though the situations did skew towards the ridiculous for-the-sake-of-drama sort. This one's a head scratcher. Almost like outsider art - which is i suppose the point.

Reviewer: nemesisbecoming Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-27-07 - 11:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

You killed Ro. I don't understand why. Seriously.

Reviewer: nemesisbecoming Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-27-07 - 11:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Christmas

Wait- whut?

Reviewer: Tiz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-11-07 - 08:49 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: Moving On

This was an absolute pleasure to read. It truly is a nice piece of work. Hope you have a lot more stories i can read! : )

Reviewer: Rainhio Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-28-07 - 04:29 am Title: Chatper Five: History

Good story.

Reviewer: Rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-10-07 - 08:58 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two: Moving On

I'm so sad, I don't know what to say. I'm such an emotional mess, I don't know how to go on. Waaaaa poor Logan, poor X-Men, POOR ME!

Thank you for the emotional ride once again. Fade left me twitching, but this just sucked the life out of me. If you are not a professional writer I suggest you get a job as one. No maybe you should work for the Pentagon, yeah that's more like it. You could leave little notes for the enemy to find that will make them want to tear out there own hearts. If Osama read this story, he would give himself up. He'd be to sad to run or hide. They'd find him in the fetal possition crying with this story clutched in his fist. LOL

Good job writing this story, Hey, I feel the numbness ebbing away. Maybe I'll be okay after all...maybe.

Hugs,
Rolletti

Reviewer: Rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-10-07 - 08:10 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

I don't know if my headache is from getting sick or crying at Ro's funeral. I love your writing, BUT YOU'RE A MEANIE. (stomping foot) NO FAIR RO IS DEAD! Okay, I can't review anymore I gotta read the last chapter before someone make a phone call and I'm carried away in a straight jacket.

Rolletti

Reviewer: Rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-10-07 - 05:51 am Title: Chapter Twenty: Christmas

I'm still deciding if I even want to talk to you. (gasping, can't catch my breath)


Rolletti

Reviewer: Rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-09-07 - 12:40 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Heart and Body

Ahhhhhhhhhh Oh what a wonderful way to wake up. Thank you for putting me out of my misery. That song, "Hurt" by Johnny Cash has been stuck in my head since I started reading this story. MAYBE JUST MAYBE my brain will think of a happy song. Lovely, wonderful, AMAZING chapter and I can't wait toread the rest.

Kisses, (now that we're friends again)
Rolletti

Reviewer: Rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-09-07 - 11:40 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Harder

OMGOSH WHAT HAPPENED?! Nooooo they finally kissed and *&%$@#$*&% I thought we were friends, Gainee. sigh Ok I gotta go read the next chapter. My nerves, my nerves. I need a sedative.

Rolletti

Reviewer: rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-09-07 - 10:53 am Title: Chapter Thirteen: Grief

WHY, WHY, WHY are you so cruel. The PAIN is unbearable, I...can...not...go...on. Help me, there is too much angst. I totally lost it when she started crying at the grave. “You said you would never leave me,” she sobbed brokenly. “Come back. I promise, I will do anything you ask, just return. Charles…please.” (wiping away a torent of tears) This is just not fair, Gainee. I'm so glad I'm not about to start my period because I would be an emotional wreck for three weeks after reading this. sniff
Onward

Rolletti

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