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Reviewer: oldies5 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-06 - 02:57 am Title: Chapter Two

this is ok for a start hope you finish soon

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-18-06 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter Two

Wonderful! Logan's grandmother is awesome. Love the ending. Tell me Temp, can you do any wrong when it come to these rolo fics?

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-18-06 - 02:30 pm Title: Chapter Two

XD

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-17-06 - 07:07 am Title: Chapter Two

This fic is funny, light, sexy and entertaining. I love all the characters. I can't wait to finally meet Jean-Paul. Ororo as a dancer is fantastic. Gotta love a sassy Betsy. I love how anal Jean is. Logan = Sex On Two Sexy Short Legs.

Looking forward to the dance competition!

Reviewer: xhollowx2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-16-06 - 04:53 pm Title: Chapter Two

Logan is so crazy. Bets is so crazy, too. They're all crazy. Except Jean. She's somewhat anal. There has to a responsible friend, I suppose. Logan is very much the horn dog. That bunny ears song..... Bwahahaha. Excellent.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-16-06 - 01:21 pm Title: Chapter Two

ROFL! LOL! Hilarious cahpter! Especially the last part! Bunny ears!!! Thing is Betsy might actually go for a threesome, not sure about Ororo though. Well i can't wait for the next chappy see what happens at the dance competition. The first part of the chapter reminded me the novel called "Can you keep a secret". The three roomies thing! Can't wait for more! (and i'm still hoping for some Odalisque)

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-16-06 - 03:18 am Title: Chapter Two

Hahahaaa...I needed this tonight. Had one of the toughest nights ever, this made me stop crying. You are a master at comedy, drama, the thinkin stuff, and evertyhing in between. Awsome job. I need a thesurus and a dictionary (lol). I use words like wow and awsome far to much in reviews.

Reviewer: RnbwRvrGrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-15-06 - 11:07 pm Title: Chapter Two

Yeah, I'd rather sing the bunny ears song than tell my grandma that I'm lusting after the heartthrob she introduced me to. Smart choice, m'boy. This does my heart good. Humorous, sexy, and light, that's good for a soul.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-15-06 - 10:22 pm Title: Chapter One

This was so great. Betsy is really, really funny. I love her use of words like "shite" and Ororo's description of her early morning diatribes as "warbling." The bunny ears song, Ororo's grandma, her bright red shorts...there was too much to even count that made this story chapter so wonderful to read. I love Logan trying not to bend over for a better look!

More Betsy, and more of Jean-Paul, I suspect he will be a riot, too, when you introduce him. I really dig this story! And like Windy said, you are the AU queen! (Windy's the queen of one-liners)

Reviewer: orlimoon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-15-06 - 09:11 pm Title: Chapter Two

It good i love it

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-15-06 - 08:44 pm Title: Chapter Two

OMG, so fun. This chapter had me grinning like a pervert in a dildo shop. Sweetness. Wondered her idea on threesomes?? That perv. (pot/kettle, I know) My fave part had to be the girl talk and "Like cunt is any better..." I swear my friend Crystal and I had a conversation like that not too long ago. So funny the words we come up with for genitals. More soon, I hope. *Bows to the AU queen*

Author's Response: LOL. I'm glad it made you smile. My friends and I had a similar conversation, too, so I had to use it. The AU queen. LOL. Yeah, I do write a lot of AU. :D They'll be more... soon... hopefully.

Reviewer: One Crazy Pinay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-15-06 - 08:39 pm Title: Chapter Two

ROTFLMFAO. The bunny ears song?? Why can I hear my own grandmother singing something like that? That's so adorable. I'm laughing so hard I'm crying. I like that "I don't like you, but I do like you" vibe going on. And Jean, poor dear, Scott HAS made her dull. Loving Bets. She's a keeper. If this wasn't a RoLo story, I might root for her to get the boy.

Author's Response: Logan doesn't understand the importance of such songs. The bunny ears song teaches kids how to tie their shoes and men how to tie their ties. They should be grateful.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-14-06 - 10:17 pm Title: Chapter One

I like this.

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-12-06 - 10:13 am Title: Chapter One

ROFL! This story is hilarious so far. I absolutely loved teh way you secribed Keiron and their little adventures together. I can't believe Roro is passing the nice grandson over to Betsy. Love it. Please update Odalisque!

Author's Response: Thank you. :D I didn't intentionally mean for it to be funny, but it happened without my consent. Odalisque will be updated... soon. I promise.

Reviewer: xhollowx2003 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-10-06 - 04:16 pm Title: Chapter One

This cracked me up. This story has a nice chicklit-ish feel to it. And I think it's a nice offset from all the serious stories you've been writing. I couldn't help giggling at some parts.

Author's Response: It'll get it's fair share of seriousness... I think.

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