YAY! I was waiting for this update! I can't wait to see what kind of trouble Raven brings to their door. She's so sneaky and callous.

RoLo. *sigh* I'm loving these tender moments and their uncertainty about where their relationship is headed. The kiss on the cheek in the kitchen was great. I actually rolled my eyes at Marie, though. Homegirl seriously needs to get a grip.

Sam Guthrie is absolutely adorable! I just want to pinch his cornfed cheeks until he blushes! LOL! I also think it's great that Hank is getting some lovin' in this fic. How hot are Hank and Alicia?

I'll wait patiently for your next installment. Great work as always! *thumbs up*

Oh yeah! Nice, Hobbins,very nice! I'm enjoying this fanfic very much! Winter is coming and there is nothing better than a love story to warm my heart! I'm looking forward to the progression of Ro and Logan's relationship with a little bump in the road by the name of Raven/Mystique. I can tell she's trouble already! LOL! She might cause more trouble than the Sentinels! Write on, windrider1, write on!

Seriously, there is nothing better than waking up, getting a cup of coffee and seeing this updated. *dies*

Hooobo! That love scene was fantastic. It was hot, hot hot! ALso slightly confused, vulnerable, and with promise that it wouldn't end there. Fantastic writing!

Hank just kills me. The exchange between him and Logan was so dead on. I was close to spitting my coffee out once or twice!

'Ro and Logan.../sigh So utterly lovely. The sexual tension was palpable, even in the cold light of day.

Trask...*growls* That guy's creeping me out!

the sentinels? for reals? ooooh. you do have a way with writing sex scenes, how do you do it? (the writing i mean)

Logan still as irritating as hell the morning after...loved it. I can't wait to read where you're going to take them in this story.

The dialouge between Hank and Logan was perfect. I think this... "Me and ’Ro ain’t got no differences.”

“Good Lord, boy, your grammar is appalling.”

Logan cocked him a warning look. “You call me boy one time too many and you’ll have a severe speech impediment after I cut out your tongue.”

“Violence is always the threat by those without the intellect to solve problems rationally.”

“’People sleep peaceably in their beds at night only because rough men stand ready to do violence on their behalf.’”

Henry raised a surprised brow. “George Orwell.”...has got to be my favorite part.


Great chapter. Convergence? Update anytime soon... maybe?

Great plot building. Even though I loved the love scene, the dialogues in this chapter were what really held my attention the most. Hank's great in this story, and consistently so. Now I want to see what Logan does to eventually relieve Ororo of her misgivings. I already see them trying to fight against the warm and cuddlies, but I want to see what pitches them forward into them head first. Should be great, knowing you. This has been such a great weekend for updates.

Your story s getting more and more interesting, every time I read an update.!! And I like how Ro and Logan are growing closer!!

Please keep th uUdates coming!!