[Report This]Date: 08-26-06 - 02:04 am Title: Six
Wah! Don't run!
*grin* Jimmy and Kitty are just the cutest. And I see a Kitty-Piotr-Bobby triangle coming up. How fun.
[Report This]Date: 08-26-06 - 12:30 am Title: Six
windrider. . .i am a fan. I have read your stories at the yahoo site and now enjoy them here. slow burn is a great tale and i particularly love the tenderness in this chapter.
keep up the great wrting.
[Report This]Date: 08-25-06 - 11:49 pm Title: Six
OH MY GOSH! it like gets better and better! A KIT KAT JIMMY??!?!?! HELLZ YEAH NIGGA! bring that shit! oh man i have goosebumps. everything is so much better instantly
[Report This]Date: 08-25-06 - 11:40 pm Title: Six
WHA....
You, you, you cant end it there. Hmph! I'll just sit here and pretend there's more. So take that!
Wait, I'm not mad. Just desperate for more.
[Report This]Date: 08-25-06 - 11:36 pm Title: Six
OoOoOoOo....
[i]“If you’re gonna run,” he rasped. “Now would be the time to do it.”[/i]
Damn cliffhangers! :D
I'm so glad to see the updates in both your stories...more please!
[Report This]Date: 08-25-06 - 06:46 pm Title: Six
There were so many good parts in this. All around great chapter.
I love the relationship between Jimmy and Kitty. Her telling Jimmy that he wasn't the first X-Kid to try and kill Logan was hilarious.
And since you ended on the note you did, you gotta update soon.
Author's Response: I hope to get an update up soon. **crosses fingers** Thank you so much for the review! I adore Kitty and Jimmy as well.
[Report This]Date: 08-25-06 - 06:45 pm Title: Six
Oh and Jimmy's "You people are so weird" just rocks.
And I take full responsibility for your distractioin. *hangs head in shame* You inspire me, what can I say?!
Author's Response: ;)
Fade is just too good. LOL. I can't tear myself away.
[Report This]Date: 08-25-06 - 06:36 pm Title: Six
WOW. This was a great update!
I love the relationship b/t Kitty and Jimmy. So sweet. Like a sibling bond. It cracked me up that Kitty was checking Peter out. Go Kitty! LOL! And Bobby...Poor Marie. She's gonna be hurt more than she already is.
Of course I loved RoLo. The silent, smoldering stares and the kiss at the end. *sigh* The last line of the chapter has me on the edge of my seat! I keep saying - "Don't run, 'Ro. STAY!"
Can't wait for more. Just beautiful!
Author's Response: More soon. Will she stay or run...hmmm...that is the question. Is it horrible of me to say I am undecided? LOL. I guess we'll find out together.
[Report This]Date: 08-25-06 - 05:15 pm Title: Six
Oh. My. God. You did NOT just end that chapter there. I'm speechless. My husband thinks I'm nuts cause I just screamed "NO SHE DIDN'T!" at my computer.
Hang on. Must collect thoughts...
Ok, things I like about this chapter are way too numerous to list completely, but I will hightlight things.
The way you described Logan's comatose state was awesome. It was abrupt and confused, which was dead on. Ororo's fear is exactly the same. Palpable, confused, and completely against her will.
Kitty and Jimmy...le sigh. Perfect. I laughed out loud at “But I almost killed Mr. Logan,” he protested.
Kitty made a peeshaw motion with her hands, rolling her eyes. “Like you’re the first X-kid to try that.” That was a great moment.
And the last line..."If you're gonna run..." *dead* More. Soon. Please. I will need something to hold onto when they yank my teeth out on Tuesday.
Brava, my darling. A masterpiece of a chapter to an epic of a fic.
Author's Response: **oodles of hugs**
You inspire me as well, my dear. You are so awesome. **adoring eyes**
[Report This]Date: 08-24-06 - 05:47 pm Title: Five
I love this story..you have gotten so much better in your writing and it refreshing to see. I love that she wouldn't give up on Logan when he "died". Oh and the ending was too cute , "you said please," *swoon*
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much for the wonderful compliment (and of course the review). More soon. Update (6) up. Enjoy!
[Report This]Date: 08-22-06 - 01:34 pm Title: Five
That was an awesome chapter Thank god storm didnt give up wolvie cant die i cant wait til you update i put this story in my favorites I'm glad youur making them fall in love slowly not like oh jeans dead your hot and here lets do it your a great writer update soon :D
Author's Response: Yeah, i'd like to avoid teh whole, "Jean's dead--you're hot--let's fuck." angle, LOL. Thank you very much for the appreciation and the review. It means a lot that you took the time to feedback!
[Report This]Date: 08-22-06 - 06:44 am Title: Five
*tries to slow down stupid heart* Okay, an exaggeration, but still. Amazing stuff you got here.
Phwee. *bows down*
Author's Response: **dances** Thank you, thank you. :D
[Report This]Date: 08-21-06 - 01:32 pm Title: Five
She said please? Wasn't that only in her mind?! But OMG! You almost killed Logan! He was so dead his healing factor couldn't work! I mean...You just figured out the only way to kill Logan. And you almost had me there for a moment. And i so love this story so damn much!!!! Love it! Love it! Love it! But i miss some real ROLO fluff, everybody's doing angst right now! But i want more. Much more! Superb. That kissing scene was HOT (and no it's not just 104 degress around here). Also the restaurant scene was lovely. You have way of writing like no one else! Update soon and don't ever say you'll stop again!
Author's Response: Logan was dead...spirit and all. So maybe he heard her that way...or maybe not...*giggle* Use your imagination. Update up, Panther. Enjoy!
[Report This]Date: 08-21-06 - 07:13 am Title: Five
Holy. You really got me hooked. OMG. I just began reading it and I'm just craving for more with each chapter. You really wrote a good one. Awesome job!
Oh, please update this one soon! I'm really desperate to know what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I appreciate the review and the kind words! :D More soon, I hope.
[Report This]Date: 08-21-06 - 04:36 am Title: Five
WOW. I wish we could use smilies in our reviews, because they would be scattered throughtout this one. AWESOME kiss. So much angst. Love angst.
Logan dead and coming back to life. 'Ro, Kitty and Hank are just a few reasons why mutants rule. They put their heads together, even in such a dire situation, to save one of their own. Poor Jimmy! I hope this doesn't make him withdraw even more. Just a heart-wrenching and beautiful scene. Made me misty.
Update soon, please! You rock!
Author's Response: Awwwww...thanks!
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