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Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-19-06 - 01:06 pm Title: Four

I know I already left you a review, but I didn't really say much. So here it is. This chapter was beautiful. For Logan to see what has been happening to Storm unintentionally was a great thing. I know your going to something amazing with this plot devolpment. My only wish was that Jean was there to see it. Oh well.

You know I'm couting down till the next update.

Author's Response: Awww, thanks reiko!! **love**

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-19-06 - 10:39 am Title: Four

I'm so happy to see that you can update here again. I think it's another great update. I can totally understand 'Ro's anger towards Jean. But, I'm happy that she was able to voice her pain. Keeping your grief bottled up inside is never healthy.

And what a way to end the chapter! I so need to read what happens after The Kiss. I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, and it is good to be back! **happy sigh** Keeping any enotion too tightly bottled is unhealthy, and Logan knows this better than most ;)

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-05-06 - 09:34 pm Title: Three

i love kitty and jimmy's relationship, and her smart mouth cracks me up and esp. the uvula tag and oral twister...lol...gee, i wonder how good that food is gonna taste once ororo hears henry's news...

Author's Response: Kitty is a fave of mine, and I really loved her in X3 so i plan to use her a bit. ;)

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 09:18 pm Title: Three

I like this, the inclusion of Trask etc, good mix of comics with the movie which makes it much more enjoyable. I'm curious to see what's up with Marie though. She was useless in the movies and even more so without powers. If I thought they messed up Storm then they killed Rogue she was so useless. I know I sound awful but ugh the movies a like bad - really bad - fan fiction. You should've been at the helm!

Author's Response: Read all of your reviews and first **loves** Thank you!! I'm not a big Rogue fan--period, so don't expect too much involving her. (sorry to all you rogue lovers) LOL at me helming anything Marvel. Riiiiiiight. ;)

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 08:58 pm Title: Two

Doug's in this! Yay! So once again I have to admit your Storm is very much like movie Storm but with more brass, more balls, more self assurance and I love that! I loved his comment about a different mutant showing up, like that she acknowledged how he didn't know anything about the school and how she explained Logan to Wolvie, sit, stay etc. But imagining movie Logan with stealth is amusing because in the movie he's an idiot, can't tell Mystique from Jean from Storm and I've never witnessed stealth but then I'm kind of a moive hater. As it is a really nice chapter, wonderful description of their kiss and appropriately timed, not too rushed, not too much just very nice.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 08:43 pm Title: One

You made me see movie Storm in a totally different light and I like that. I most especially loved the quips between Kitty and Ororo, something the movie was lacking. Nicely done. Oh, and I like the inclusion of the picture up top.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-01-06 - 09:41 am Title: Three

darn..Ro does not need anymore bad new. I think she is in need of a certain french speaking, sweet talker to spice up her life.

Author's Response: Gambit has a cameo. It's small, but there. ;) Hope you like.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-01-06 - 09:26 am Title: Two

I'm such a fan of yours that despite the fact that I'm hugely disappointed with X-3,. I was willing to put up with all the reminders just for you :-)

Reviewer: Franny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-06 - 05:30 pm Title: Three

Wow, I loved this chapter. I hope to read from you soon!!
-Fran

Author's Response: Thanks, Franny!! I hope to have more for you to read soon! :D

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-06 - 01:52 pm Title: Three

This story is getting more and more interesting. I have a feeling Trask has sentinels unde his sleeve, doesn't he? And with the new guys fighting for the right to choose the cure, maybe Rogue will run away and join them? Maybe she meets a certain raging cajun *hint*? What are you doing with Magneto and Mysique? I'm sure they also have something to do with all this mess. I looved the exchange between Kitty and Ororo, especially the talk about Logan killing everyone (duck taping them to the walls?!?! ROFL). And more yummy ROLO! I can'ta wit for Logan to teach Ro how to fight! It's gonna be so cool! Update really really soon! Like before friday, please?

Author's Response: I shall try Pnather to get an update done before you head out. I will try hard. So cross your fingers.No Romy. I hate Romy. You will NEVER see Romy in my stories. Just so ya know. They may be a couple, like in winds but I will not romanticize that trainwreck. Ever. **end rant**

Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-06 - 01:03 pm Title: Three

i really like this sory, cant wait to see where it goes, i'm still getting over the beauty of kingdom come, and hooked on Convergence

i love the line, “My apologies, Forge. We’ve barely taught him to stay. We’re still working on sit and shake.”
that was good, really laughed at that one

update soon!


Author's Response: More coming up. :D Glad you laughed!

Reviewer: KrystalNic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-06 - 12:48 pm Title: Three

Cannot wait for the danger room~!!
What would happen during their fight?...Logan would not really beat her...Lust......
Imagining....

Author's Response: LOL. We'll see what happens. **grin**

Reviewer: Mignon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-06 - 09:41 am Title: Three

Ohhhh.... and the plot thickens. ..so much is about to go down and I love the tie-ins with the moive.

Also,I kinda feel bad for Ro. She seems to be running at full throttle and is about to burn out...soon.

Another Great Chapter!



Author's Response: Ororo is running full tilt and as we all know, even she can fizzle. So you're right. Burnout in 3...2... ;) More coming up.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-06 - 08:16 am Title: Three

I'm enjoying this fic so much. I absolutely love the way you write. Trask is an ass. Of course, Hank would stand up for the X-Men. He's too noble not to. Love the Kitty and Jimmy interaction. When will Rogue get some self-esteem and stop trying to change for a boy? Love RoLo! They just make me smile. I can't wait for their Danger Room session.

Great update!

Author's Response: Hank is awesome. Beast OWNED X3. LOL. I mean that. he frikkin' owned all. More story, characters and of course RoLo coming up!! Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-31-06 - 05:02 am Title: Three

Trask. Oh, wonderful. I wanna fry that dude's sorry ass. But I do love how Hank pissed him off. It was great.

The Logan-Ororo exchange about her fighting skills was perfect! *grin*

Waiting to see what crazy stuff are gonna happen next.

Author's Response: Crazy stuff on the way! And thanks for the review!!!

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