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Reviewer: modernbard Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-30-06 - 09:48 pm Title: Three

Perfect tie in with the last movie. Brilliant move to protect the mansion. More of this please!!!

Author's Response: More soon, and thanks! I'm glad you like the tie ins. I had hoped they fit and didn't feel forced.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-30-06 - 09:48 pm Title: Three

Boooo no more words....fix that, it will be much better :P!

Lotso love


Author's Response: Uhm....oooookay.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-30-06 - 09:08 pm Title: Three

Talk about wonderful weekend surprises. This made this day perfect, when it started out unexceptional.

Great pacing, great plot twist, and of course, I love Rahne. I opted to have Dani in my own piece, just because she is my other favorite New Mutant. And she gets a mention in the novel.

Talk to you later. My own update is stumbling along...too many interruptions, arguments, and the usual b.s. Ain't life grand?

CeeCee

Author's Response: Thanks for the corrections you pointed out. ;) Rahne won't be a prominent player in this. THe main characters are pretty much going to be Ro/Lo, Kitty, Jimmy, bobby (some Rogue), Beast and of course badass Trask. Everyone else is there, but not story effective. Hope the wall get knocked down and the writing flows for you!!

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-30-06 - 09:07 pm Title: Three

Love this! So love it. And I can't wait to see what happens next! Continue soon! :D

Author's Response: Will do. More coming up...soon, I think. Depends. I have another mad/crazy work week. ;)

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-30-06 - 08:39 pm Title: Three

at this la belle rouge.... does a certain mutant named gambit work there?

Author's Response: Honest too goodness i never even thought of that, but y'know, i could see a Gambit cameo at La Belle. =) Thanks for the idea!!

Reviewer: Mignon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-25-06 - 09:55 pm Title: Two

Intriguing chapter! LOL, I lovehow Ro and Logan are interacting...they barely tolerate each other, yet they both fantasize about each other...ahhh, don't the best romances start like this. : 0)

Great Chapter!



Author's Response: Romance is the feel I want this story to have, with of course underlying sexual tension, but definitely a love story at heart. :D Thank you for the review!!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 02:47 pm Title: Two

Wow. Another perfect chapter. Damn Bobby not going to bed when he is told. But LOVED this chapter. I just fits so well with everything else! MORE! Soon. Plaese.

Author's Response: Your reviews always make me smile. More soon, Panther. :D

Reviewer: Annonymous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 11:30 am Title: Two

Nice story, I like the way you're building it up to a category 5 hurricane

Author's Response: I love that analogy!! And thank you for the review!! :D

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 10:30 am Title: Two

cute! and these to have been fantasizing about each other, eh? i think they should take the time to indulge in the real thing a lot more : )

Author's Response: They will....eventually. Promise. :D Thanks for teh review.

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 04:25 am Title: Two

I absolutely adore Bobby in this chapter. *laugh*

'Ro and Logan's reactions? Hilarious. I love this. There's this huge grin on my face right now and I don't think it's gonna go away.

PS. Waaa! Update Convergence! *pleads*

Author's Response: I hope that grin sticks around...at least for this story. ;) Thanks for teh review!!

Reviewer: KrystalNic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-06 - 11:54 pm Title: Two

Coolllllllllllllllllllll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
They only share their kissin this chapter but it already more exciting than the sexual scene~!!!!
WAITING FOR UPDATE~!!FOR BOTH CONERGENCE AND SLOW BURN~!!!

Author's Response: :D Thanks. Update for Convergence is up. Slow Burn in the batters box. (grin)

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-06 - 10:02 pm Title: Two

There you go again. Another perfect chapter. Darn that Logan, he's just hotter than a tamale, isn't he? Itch scratched...hoo, boy. More great lines and innuendoes, Windy.

Great interactions with Logan and Forge, I was hoping for that. Great tension, great little "pissing contest" with the two men not trusting each other. This feels a lot different from your Ultimate fics. I love those fics, but this story is so wonderfully tangible, and I can see the scenes unfolding like they were happening right in my living room. Wish they were...damn it.

CeeCee

Author's Response: **blushes** Awww, thanks, Cee. I want this to feel different. Two different verses, but I'm sure the styles will eventually bleed togather. I'm still hammering out how I write best, so in each story there's a little experimenting. ;) Thanks much for the review, darlin'.

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-06 - 08:59 pm Title: Two

Hot damn I loved this chapter! Loved, I tell you! The only question is how they're ever gonna get to sleep now. :D Can't wait for an update, so continue soon! :D

Author's Response: :D Thank you very, very much. Sleep...? Hahaha. Could you kiss Logan and sleep? I know I couldn't.

Reviewer: Goddessreicho Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-06 - 08:39 pm Title: Two

Favorite Line: "Come here, Princess." That was sexy as hell. And they both fantasize about each other, more hotness. This is great. I.WANT.MOOOOOOORE!

Author's Response: More soon. Just updated Convergence and this story is moved up to the "next" slot on my to do list. So, hopefully not too long before another chapter formulates. Love the review!! :D

Reviewer: Krystal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-17-06 - 12:51 pm Title: One

So...it is an X4....
Would there be Mystique stick around Logan??? You never write about Mystique in your stories~!!!!!! It would be very interesting~!!!!!

By the way, the novelization of X3 said that Jean: Scott is love, Logan is passion. And she need and desire them both~~~~

PS:LOOKING FORWARD TO THE UPDATE OF CONVERGENCE

Author's Response: Mystique? Not sure I'll add her or not. I should, she was a large portion of the movie verse conflict. we'll see. Convergence updated.

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