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Reviewer: digital tempest Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-15-06 - 08:09 pm Title: One

LOL. Bless Kitty's soul. This was a nice blend of serious and funny. Very nicely done as always. I can't get enough of your stories. :D

Author's Response: **is flattered** Thanks. I'm on fic overdrive right now.

Reviewer: Franny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-14-06 - 09:22 pm Title: One

I like the first chapter, this is interesting. And I see you'ce placed Forge in here, really good, I'm looking forward for the next chapter. Update Soon!
-Franny

Author's Response: Forge won't be around for too long, just enough to cause a ruffle and as a way to explain all the high tech gadgets the Xers have that is never really done in the books or movies. Soooo...here's my way of making sense of that . ;) More very soon, as soon as my Convergence update is done actually...which I'll be starting tomorrow morning. ;)

Reviewer: Hetairai Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-14-06 - 07:41 pm Title: One

I'm muy intrigued. I love the similarity and distance between these two.

“Courtesy noted. And, Logan…”

“Yeah?”

“I am not your darlin’.” She hung up.


lol!

So Forge's a-coming eh? And from the way he's on the phone I just know he's gonna be a stirrer.

Author's Response: He's a bit character, no real substantial weight to the story aside from his initial meeting in the next chapter or so, but you're right, he stirs the plot pot nicely. :)

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-14-06 - 03:07 pm Title: One

Good start and good read. Update soon. ;)

Author's Response: Will do, and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-14-06 - 12:44 pm Title: One

Very very nice! Perfect view of how the movieverse stands now. Especially Logan's point of view. Well it's an interesting begining, but then again all of your stories are interesting. I also loved the way you made them both stay up late at nights and both have nightmares. And those regular 5.30 am breakfasts sound interesting aswell...pefect oportunities for them to talk. Bobby never really did strike me as the early riser tipe though. Actually quite the opposite. Also are you going to give Rogue, Mageneto & Mistique their powers back? That would make for a briliant plotline. Especially Rogue, after wanting to take the cure, she'd be devastated to be back to her old self. Can't wait for more! Oh, and don't forget about Convergence?

Author's Response: I haven't forgotten Convergence Panther, no worries there. :D I am using the movieverse as my framework and that's all I'm saying in regards to plot.;) Bobby always struck me as the over hyper up and at 'em guy in the comics and in the films he's a really nice blend of easy charm and suprising reliability. At least for em, so that's how I'll use him. ;)

Reviewer: Kay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-14-06 - 12:41 pm Title: One

Love it. Update soon!

Author's Response: 'Kay, Kay. :P Thanks for the encouragement!

Reviewer: DaughteroftheWind Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-14-06 - 12:02 pm Title: One

nice start I love it. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: More on this soon...really. :P

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-14-06 - 03:53 am Title: One

Oooh. This is some deep stuff. Major deep stuff. You know, the kind that makes me think so hard that vein in my temple starts throbbing like mad.

You're real good with emotions, I'll give you that. And you write Logan and Ororo so well (in different ways too!).

'Mazing. I'm gonna be following this.

Author's Response: I hope you do follow and enjoy this. :D I appreciate the review and the wonderful praise. **hugs**

Reviewer: Voli23 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-14-06 - 03:29 am Title: One

Very very nicely done!!! Bravo! This seems to be the perfect use of movieverse. Please do continue.

Author's Response: I will, thanks for the review. :D

Reviewer: Jamie B. Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-14-06 - 02:49 am Title: One

Is it possible for me to love a story this much after only one chapter? I think so! I absolutely love all of your stories, so this shouldn't be any different. Logan and Ro with their smart ass comments, gotta love it! Can't wait for another chapter.

Author's Response: Awwwww, thanks. **hugs** Another chapter soon. I hope. ;)

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-14-06 - 12:05 am Title: One

Oh, I think I found another story to get addicted to. :D Love, love, *love* this! And I can't wait for the next chapter, so please, please, please, continue soon! :D

Author's Response: **does happy dance** Thank you so much for teh love nad the enthusiasm. Will be updating soon, right after Convergence.

Reviewer: Mignon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-14-06 - 12:01 am Title: One

Great beginning! I'm really liking the fact that this story is set after X3...can't wait to see where this story progresses.

Author's Response: Thanks. This is set entirely in the movie verse with only the film and possible novels as reference (though mainly film) and I can't wait to see the progression either. ;)

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-13-06 - 10:56 pm Title: One

eeeeek! i was wondering when you'd do an x3 fic! extra super bouncy excited about this one! i use too many exclamation points...

Author's Response: eeeek? Nice!! I hope you stay excited for this story. It has a lot of life in it. Lots of plot, lots of development. Not my usual dump the reader midplot story, but a build up and unfolding sorta story. ;) Hope you like, and as always a million thanks for the review.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-13-06 - 10:55 pm Title: One

Love it! Love it! Love it!

You write these characters so beautifully. I love how 'Ro and Logan are really just co-existing right now. You picked the perfect title for this story. This will definitely be a "Slow Burn". I can't wait for it!

“AndhecouldplayBeast!”

BTW, this line cracked me up!!!! I love Beauty and the Beast! I had a visual of 'Ro and Hank dancing around a ballroom. LMAO!!!


Author's Response: I got that inspiration (Beauty and Beast) from teh X3 novel. Claremont has a scene where Ro and Beast hug and she's thinking how nice it was being held by him, and she thinks it's no coincidence that Beauty & the Beast is so frequently taken from the library. I just loved that so I had to use it. Besides I love Beauty and the Beast, always have. love it even more now that I know Jackman played Gaston (yes, really) in the live action version. Lucky Belle.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-13-06 - 10:36 pm Title: One

Cute. Hello, Kitty. Love it, of course.

What makes this piece stand out, aside from being movieverse instead of your beloved Ultimate verse, is the subtlety and the way you developed the character history and exposition. Normally, you're a little like me and dump the reader straight into the dialogue right off the bat, but this was great. When I do more than a couple of paragraphs of exposition, I bore my poor readers to death. You definitely pulled this off. You're off the hook for not getting me more Convergence, for the moment...

CeeCee

Author's Response: Hee hee, for the moment? No worries Convergence is my next update. So hopefully you won't hunt me down and beat me. :P

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