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Reviewer: Gaineewop Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-10-07 - 11:35 am Title: Sixteen

Oh my God. You didn't just end that chapter there. You can't have. Where's the rest?

You broke my heart, Windy. *holds out shattered pieces* This chapter was the mother of all comebacks. The long hiatus? Don't remember it. Beautifully written and each new scene flowed perfectly. The pace left me breathless while you broke my heart and set my anger on fire.

I want more. Can ya tell?

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-10-07 - 07:34 am Title: Sixteen

good to have you back. you're almost completely back! trask will always be an asswad!

here's patiently waiting for the next installation.

Reviewer: me Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-10-07 - 12:40 am Title: Sixteen

damn! good stuff!

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06-10-07 - 12:37 am Title: Sixteen

Oh, you evil, lovely woman! A cliffhanger that has me saying "oh, s**t!" Bring it on. Trask, explosions, Hank saying "well fuck, indeed." Lots of crunchy, wholesome goodness in this chapter. I'm so glad you had an eensy teensy window of free time to write us something, Hobbins.

And I love the image of Ororo going all "Wolvie" staring down Johannson in the study with Jimmy behind her back. She almost had claws and hackles!

Reviewer: athena Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-14-07 - 11:53 pm Title: Fifteen

I love this story. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Tiz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-08-07 - 02:40 am Title: One

onestly she didn’t know what she’d do if she ever fell in love. She probably wouldn’t even recognize it if it was right in front of her face.



that was a great way to end the chap!!!!

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-23-07 - 01:19 pm Title: Fifteen

Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-19-07 - 04:25 pm Title: Fifteen

Mmmmhh yeah, me likes rabbits, too *snickers knowingly* :D As soon as Ro blushed I knew exactly what kind of rabbit she liked LOL
Logan running in on Raven and Marie, brilliant! I'm just not sure if it's really over now. Marie might not be in it any longer, but Raven...? "Eric was right, you think everything is about you." So I guess it's about Ro then. Ugh, Raven, what the hell are you up to?!
Now who wants to take Jimmy away? Damn them! *grumbles*

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-08-07 - 04:51 pm Title: Fifteen

Read the rest of this at work and am I glad to get caught up finally! Your plots are always so well integrated, something I admire very much, never too much of the outside stuff and lots of RoLo, just the right combo. Now I'm looking forward to the next chapter but take your time.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-07-07 - 09:17 pm Title: One

Windyrider, please forgive me that last review I left for chapter one was for another story so you can go ahead and delete it. I'm still on chapter nine, read half of it at work. I ususally read at work and write out my reviews then copy and paste.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-07-07 - 08:54 pm Title: One

Story started with, I thought, yet another danger room scene much to my dread. I don't know why it is but I've read a lot of them lately. Well, this was good, very quick too and I enjoyed their compaionable relationship which was clearly shown here. I'm thinking this is pretty good. And then I get to the sex! It just was slipped in there pretty neatly. A crisp, scene well done, well written and the length - no pun intended - was just right. Now I'm curious how Logan will get over all this. Well done.

Reviewer: rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-06-07 - 08:47 pm Title: Fifteen

HEY?! where the hell is Jimmy going?

Reviewer: rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-06-07 - 08:47 pm Title: Fifteen

HEY?! where the hell is Jimmy going?

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-05-07 - 08:00 pm Title: Eight

Eek! Gak! Jiminy! You used Raven! I'm flustered because last night I was thinking how it would be fun to use her in a story. It's that like minds maybe - lol.

Okay, I love the students here, love the interactions, definitely love that they're from the comic. It's interesting having Raven pop up.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-05-07 - 08:00 pm Title: Eight

Eek! Gak! Jiminy! You used Raven! I'm flustered because last night I was thinking how it would be fun to use her in a story. It's that like minds maybe - lol.

Okay, I love the students here, love the interactions, definitely love that they're from the comic. It's interesting having Raven pop up.

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