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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-03-06 - 07:42 pm Title: Five Minute Friend

I know how hard it is not to start on an idea especially when your mind won't stop coming up with new ideas but it's always good to see a new story by you. I love the brown eyes/blue eyes concept and of course am looking forward to more!

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-01-06 - 07:22 pm Title: Five Minute Friend

You are so talented, DT. I love your writing voice.

I love this 'Ro. She seems like she's pissed all the time. I like seeing her angry. Dont ask why. Logan is still running off when things get tough. When will he ever learn? Who's this "suck up". I'm very intrigued...

Reviewer: SMN Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-30-06 - 05:47 pm Title: Five Minute Friend

I think I've already told you everything I thought over AIM. Just update, yeah?

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-06 - 01:37 pm Title: Five Minute Friend

Hmm...interesting start. With all of these updates i'm having a hard time keeping up. Well, upate soon, and i'm still waiting for Odalisque.

Reviewer: RnbwrvrGrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-06 - 01:47 pm Title: Five Minute Friend

*squees* That's all I can do. Update soon! :D

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-26-06 - 09:56 pm Title: Five Minute Friend

I'm a DT addict. More, please?

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-26-06 - 09:20 pm Title: Five Minute Friend

Love this! I love the way you've described everything, and I think the atmosphere and tone are perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter, so I hope you post more soon. :D

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-26-06 - 06:03 pm Title: Five Minute Friend

Go DT, Go Dt, Go DT, Go!!!!! I hope everything works out for ya.

This is awsome by they way. I wonder how Logan is going to make up the debachery of X3 to Ororo. Escepecally after "Control Lost." I don't think he can just have sex with her again and everything is a-ok. Lol. This has peaked my interest cause your gonna make it addictive and awsome, as usual.

Um who brought the food? Is that imporatant?

And why do I get a kick outta seeing a frustrated Wolvie and Ro cause he fucked up, those seem to be the most interesting stories for me.

Not to be annoying or anything...but where Odalisque? Pleeeeeeease? :D

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-26-06 - 05:31 pm Title: Five Minute Friend

It's an excellent start, good read. Update soon. ;)

Reviewer: Mon-luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-26-06 - 05:18 pm Title: Five Minute Friend

And I pity the fool who rejects your story. Go Tempest!

Reviewer: Mon-luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-26-06 - 05:17 pm Title: Five Minute Friend

Okay, I was gonna sign in, but I forgot my password. Go me. Aidan is so mellow but for some reason I can definitely see them "somewhat" arguing to this song. I say somewhat because I read their argument as really quiet exchange that had the potential to become loud if she'd ever take the bait and if they hadn't been interrupted by mystery person. Excellent choice in mood music.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-26-06 - 05:01 pm Title: Five Minute Friend

Who brought her the food? And should Logan be threaten? Other than that it is beautifully written as always and I wish you luck about getting your work published.

Author's Response: I promise we're getting to that. :) Next chapter in fact, so no teasing. And thank you, I'm more nervous than anything.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-26-06 - 04:46 pm Title: Five Minute Friend

That's great. I'm so glad you are submitting your work to different media, Tempest. You're just go good at it. Good luck!

As for this...more elegantly woven drama and the complicated relationship between these two that I have grown to love. I can't wait for the other four chapters. It's so amazing to see Ororo as this hard, stalwart character coming apart at the seams and not wanting to open up. Again, their roles seem reversed, which is always a fun change in fanfic. Great, great, great.

Author's Response: Tell that to my husband. He says is pseudo-feminist ranting because I do tend to make female characters a little hard. LOL.

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