

Date: 08-20-06 - 09:09 am Title: Chapter Eight: Chaos Factor
**wipes drool from lips**
You are mean.

Date: 08-20-06 - 04:21 am Title: Chapter Six: Renegades, Rebels, and Rogues
Aw, man.
Hell, honestly speaking, you could write a bloody novel and it'll sell millions. Damn.
Everything means something, everything leads to something. I know you don't do cliffies much, but I'm totally hooked to this fic.
Update soon, please?

Date: 08-20-06 - 01:00 am Title: Chapter Seven: Unearthed
Dang, girl. Two updates in one day was fabulous on its own, especially when they were both so amazingly good. But the dreamscapes...the dark feel to their nightmares and the way that Ororo's situation keeps invading the little piece of peaceful happiness they are trying to find together in the wilderness is just addictive. And you once again managed to evoke memories for me of old Xmen tales; I thought of Magneto unburying himself from a shallow grave when he was a child after he and his family were mon down with bullets by the Nazis in Classic XMen, and it made it more compelling that it was Storm this time, with her horrible claustrophobia. I've been digging around with a plot for my own story that focused on Jean being angry at having been killed by Logan in While You Were Out, but I never would have arrived here. Wonderful, wonderful work.

Date: 08-19-06 - 10:08 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Unearthed
Loved the plate snap!! Great stuff, of course...more please!!

Date: 08-19-06 - 08:43 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Unearthed
I'm so tired from real Life tonight, I completely missed this chapter before. But, I'm glad I went back and checked again. Sweet Jesus, that was hot. And Logan snapping the plate was too perfect. Such a spot on reaction. Great job on this, hun! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Date: 08-19-06 - 08:41 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Unearthed
LOL!!!! I can't stop laughing. If that's going to keep happening they may want to invest in some plastic ware.

Date: 08-19-06 - 07:37 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Unearthed
I can't stop laughing, picturing Logan's befuddled (yet somehow intense) expression outside of the bathroom door. That was a hot little scene. I'm ready for the real thing, though *hint*

Date: 08-19-06 - 07:29 pm Title: Chapter Six: Renegades, Rebels, and Rogues
*sigh* I am loving this. Loving it. And I'm addicted. :D Which means you have to continue soon. I have to know what's going on with the people who had Storm, and uh...this fic is rated NC-7 for a reason, right? ;)

Date: 08-19-06 - 06:57 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Unearthed
Two updates in one day? Woot!
The visual of them burying 'Ro and her freeing herself was beautiful written. The imagery that conjured up was just...wow!
I laughed out loud when I read that Logan broke the plate when 'Ro called his name. That was fantastic!
I am so loving this story.

Date: 08-19-06 - 06:07 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Unearthed
I'm loving these rapid updates. They keep a fiend like myself satisfied. The scene when Ororo climbed out of her grave took me back to Kill Bill Vol. 2.(Love that movie.) I saw 'Ro as Beatrix. Just a beautifully written scene. Great job on that.
Logan's dream was heart-wrenching. So very, very sad. It's horrible that he has to be haunted by something that he HAD to do. If not, Jean would've destroyed the world.
The Shower Scene. *blinks rapidly w/ mouth agape* OMG! That was HOT! Of course, Logan hears EVERYTHING! Loved it! I can't wait to see how they act around each other afterwards.
Update soon, please!

Date: 08-19-06 - 05:49 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Unearthed
like i said before, this story is fantastic. and yes. . . i checked in for updates again, today. its to good not to check!! keep posting. i can't wait for the mystery to be solved.

Date: 08-19-06 - 05:29 pm Title: Chapter Seven: Unearthed
you spoil us. i love it!

Date: 08-19-06 - 12:55 pm Title: Chapter Six: Renegades, Rebels, and Rogues
Goodness Lady, two updates in like a day. I love it all. The sing-a-long, the liqour, the puppies (awwww), and the buzz. I have never seen that before ever in a fic. That is such a brilliant idea. It's implied so well. It makes both Ororo and Logan so damn adorable. OMG I've fallen in love with your characters again. I love it when fic writers make me love their characters. You as well as so many others here do it over and over again. Even the oc's are enjoyable. That's why I love the Realm. Never have I ever seen so many fleshed out realasitic oc's. Gainee, your remarkable skills have bound me up, and squeezed to make me squeel all over again!

Date: 08-19-06 - 12:12 pm Title: Chapter Six: Renegades, Rebels, and Rogues
Loved the entire bar scene. I loved that Logan had all the women swooning. Of course he would, though. He's Logan! LOL! I heart RoLo.
Poor 'Ro. Someone seriously needs to be hurt. They were gonna bury her alive?!?!? Sickos!
More, please!

Date: 08-19-06 - 12:09 pm Title: Chapter Six: Renegades, Rebels, and Rogues
Man. That's deep. I wish every woman in the world could have their own personal Logan. That's why I read your stories. I'm laughing as I picture Ororo singing along to "Bubba Shot the Jukebox." Now I need to go download that song!
This isn't just one of your best stories. Its one of THE best stories!