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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07-31-16 - 07:24 pm Title: An Intricate and Endangering Spark

what happened next?

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-27-07 - 08:37 am Title: An Intricate and Endangering Spark

Well, I normally don't care for movie verse and I too have issues with X3 plus I don't normally read NC17 but OMIGOSH this was a very good beginning just spilling over with possibilities and oh the potential! Nicely done and welcome to the Realm!

Reviewer: modernbard Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-23-06 - 07:46 pm Title: An Intricate and Endangering Spark

How intriguing! Although, I kind of wish she had zapped him for that one. Oh well, the movie version of Ororo was not quite as feisty as the comic version. More please!

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-21-06 - 01:20 pm Title: An Intricate and Endangering Spark

Good start, now is there more?. ;)

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-21-06 - 10:42 am Title: An Intricate and Endangering Spark

Ouch!!!!!!!! The ending just killed me. I'm not one for angst but this i'm loving

Reviewer: Pari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-21-06 - 09:42 am Title: An Intricate and Endangering Spark

This is an awesome start! You have me gagging for more here. Please update soon.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-21-06 - 06:38 am Title: An Intricate and Endangering Spark

Wow, this was really, really good. Nice imagery. i was right there in the scene and the emotions were very well written and delivered. *thumbs up*

Reviewer: digital tempest Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-20-06 - 06:30 pm Title: An Intricate and Endangering Spark

Angst is a girl's best friend. Okay, not really, but I happen to like angst... a lot. Excellent start to what promises to be an excellent fic. You did a wonderful job of really capturing the sadness of the day.The feeling was very tangible.Loved the imagery of Ro as the wolf who'd be willing to do anything for those she loves. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Okay maybe a second best friend, I really do fancy diamonds myself :P Your praise means a lot to me, you're like my fanfiction hero. Now stop reading my fic and give me an update to Codename... :)

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-20-06 - 04:20 pm Title: An Intricate and Endangering Spark

I'm glad you're not just sitting on this story idea and that you decided to post it for us to enjoy. Nice interaction, nice reference to Scott and Ororo's friendship, and I love the comparison between Ororo and the wolf, it was a compelling mental image and very creative. Normally Logan's always compared to a wolf. Good work

Author's Response: Thanks, I used to really hate Scott in the comic but the big screen version of the character kinda made me come around. I love wolverine but the way he really came at Jean in the movie made me uncomfortable, it was missing all the nuances that would have made it more acceptable/beliveable. Glad you liked the reference to the wolf, I've always thought Ororo had some wolf like qualities and will probably reference it again in coming chapters.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-20-06 - 02:49 pm Title: An Intricate and Endangering Spark

You're right. This is angsty, but I like it. I like how you were able to capture both 'Ro and Logan's pain. Poor Scott. Not knowing if Jean loved him or Logan at her 'death', was so sad.

'Willing for the moment to be his life preserver in their sea of tears."

^That's my favorite line from this chapter. Can't wait for more!





Author's Response: I'm a real sucker for angst, I live for angst. :) It's funny I almost took that line out actually, felt a little to melodramatic for me. I'm glad you liked it. :)

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