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Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed [Report This]
Date: 08-18-12 - 04:34 pm Title: This Heart of Mine, Pt. 1

I read this earlier this morning and had to come back to review. It is well worth the time to do so, you wrote both characters so emotionally open. I really liked it. A A

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-15-07 - 12:08 pm Title: This Heart of Mine, Pt. 1

Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-10-06 - 10:40 am Title: This Heart of Mine, Pt. 1

Good story and good chapter. ;)

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-10-06 - 10:34 am Title: This Heart of Mine, Pt. 1

Good story and good chapter. ;)

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-03-06 - 04:46 pm Title: This Heart of Mine, Pt. 1

When the opening line read "The next morning was weird as crap," that hooked me into reading the rest of the chapter very happily! This story is warm and cute and makes me smile. Nice dialogue between the leads. Logan is written in character. Good job.

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I wasn't really sure if Logan was in character or not, I haven't seen any of the movies or cartoons in ages, and I've only read one of the comics (I'm trying to locate more), so I was just hoping that his behavior at least slightly resembled the Logan in the movies and etc. I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Mimz Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-29-06 - 01:08 pm Title: Mixed Emotions

Short but sweet. I'm liking it so far, hope you up date soon

Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate that, and I'm working on that now, I've been writing down possible situations for chapter 2!! :]

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-29-06 - 11:05 am Title: Mixed Emotions

This is a nice beginning.

Author's Response: Thanks, I wasn't sure if it was any good or not when I finished chapter 1, so I'm glad you think it's off to a good start!!

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