Reviews For WIld Storm
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Reviewer: irish_sunset Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-30-07 - 10:33 pm Title: The Once and Future King

Okay, this chapter helped with the confusion. Thanks.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-30-07 - 04:45 pm Title: REVELATIONS

Very interesting fic. I wonder what Jin is supposed to learn and how he could drain off or at least prevent the manifestation of the Phoenix.
I look forward to your next update!

Reviewer: VenomQueen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-29-07 - 10:33 pm Title: REVELATIONS

*Squeals* This is really great, I love the realization b/t grandfather and grandchild. Poor Logan getting the cold shoulder.

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-29-07 - 03:45 pm Title: REVELATIONS

i am interested in reading more of this story.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-29-07 - 12:09 pm Title: REVELATIONS

Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-29-07 - 01:42 am Title: REVELATIONS

This chapter wasn't spaced well which could make it hard to read for some and I felt as if I’d missed something. Jin seemed to come out of no where leaving me very confused. A potentially good story with a very confusing third chapter.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-29-07 - 01:41 am Title: The return of Memories

Still quite intriguing though I’m a little confused. Is Jean pregnant too?

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-29-07 - 01:40 am Title: Chapter 1 The Return of Questions

Very intriguing beginning. Nicely written, most especially the description of Ororo as she slept and her scent and hair - I don’t think I’ve ever heard anyone call it ivory before and I always like new descriptions.

Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-07 - 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 1 The Return of Questions

well done

Reviewer: rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-28-07 - 08:40 pm Title: REVELATIONS

I loved chapter one and two, you did an outstanding job with the characters and Storm loosing control. It's nice to see the foundation of their relationship take place.

Now I'm expecting you to say you uploaded the wrong chapter for three. It doesn't fit the story line. So could you help your fans, because this really is a good story I would like to continue reading.

Smooches,
Rolletti

Reviewer: salad Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-07 - 08:24 pm Title: REVELATIONS

this is a good story... but im getting confused about Jin. at first i thought he was 'JEAN' and u just spelled her wrong. but as it turned out it wasnt Jean and it was Jin. who is from the future... but.... how did he get there? how in the world did he appear. cos it seems like im suddenly reading about Jin in Chapt. 3 so it got me a little confused.

but all in all... its has a good beginning for a great story.

keep it up!

Reviewer: irish_sunset Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-27-07 - 06:01 pm Title: REVELATIONS

I like this, but I must admit that the transition from Chapter 2 to 3 is a bit confusing. I thought Ro had went to her room after the confrontation. But three opens up with her still outside. Also, in Chap. 2 was there even a mention of Jin being there? Cause obviously in 3 he was. Please help w with the confusion.

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