Date: 08-07-11 - 10:24 am Title: Chapter 18 - Enter Sandman, Part Three
this was a satisfying cliff-hanger. I love the last lines.
[Report This]Date: 08-01-11 - 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Enter Sandman, Part Three
OMG!! Whatever are they going to do now?? He has gotten exactly what he wanted!! Now that he has entered Ororo's consciousness has he left Scott? Maybe if so, Scott can offer some insight to the team as to what he has planned.
Date: 07-03-11 - 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Enter Sandman, Part Two
definitely too short!!! Kevin's turning out to be a sneaky little hobo, then again he does want out at any cost I just hope it doesn't hurt Rahne too much. And at least 'Ro has less of a nightmare and more of a dream. Where's Logan?
Author's Response: He IS a sneaky little hobo. Guy wants out of his cage, he's more powerful than ever, and he's a rebellious teenager who hates his parents. Nice thing about Rahne in canon is that she has a mild healing factor like Wolvie's, so she probably won't take too much damage. Much. Logan is still waiting in the wings, slowly but surely getting a clue. It was hard to fit him into this portion of the story. Most of this part has been about Farouk.
Date: 06-29-11 - 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Enter Sandman, Part Two
I can't wait for someone to take down Farouk once and for all!!
Author's Response: That time is coming soon.
[Report This]Date: 04-20-11 - 08:42 pm Title: Enter Sandman
OK Cee you did it again. You have got me hooked on and awaiting anxiously for an update on yet another awesome story!
I love your character development and the dark, intense suspense you developed in this story. I hope we hear from you again soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, QT. You will. I just uploaded an update yesterday. Sorry for the late reply from this one. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 02-15-11 - 08:56 am Title: Enter Sandman
Great update! It’s been so long since I’ve looked at this story I had to re-read it again – not a hard task considering I do remember how much I enjoyed it the first time. Although I don’t believe I ever reviewed? So will cover the main points now. I love the complexity of this story - You’ve got some great opportunities to throw in some twists and turns, so much so I’m not sure where this story is going lead which makes reading it all the more fun. Your character development is great – you’ve managed to really develop other characters in line with the story so whilst Ororo and Logan are the stars you can still follow the back of the story with the other characters. Congratulations on Logans characters as well - at first I wasn’t convinced you could take an adult Logan saving a Child Ororo to a romance but you really have succeeded, not an easy thing! I don’t really have any criticisms other than to be careful you don’t lose a few readers in the plots complexity, especially for those not 100% updated on the comic characters and backgrounds – then again it may be that I hadn’t read it in a while and needed reminding - update again soon!
Author's Response: It's definitely not the story for people who have never read the comics, I will certainly admit it, but this is my pet piece. I've been working on it for a long time, and once I finish it, I'll wipe away the sweat, say "Phew!" and move on to my AU fics, which are a little easier to read, since they don't rely as much on character history and often have simpler plots. Glad you like how it's developing, I'm trying to stay on track. Adult Logan saving child Ororo was a stretch, I know, and it took a risk, but that was part of why I removed him for a while and let her grow up without him, so it wouldn't have that "Lolita" feel. In the comics, Logan is around 150 years old, and Ororo's supposed to be late twenties or even early thirties, so that's a big age gap, anyway. By the time he had his first cigarette, her grandparents hadn't even been born yet.
Good to hear from you.
[Report This]Date: 02-14-11 - 12:09 am Title: Enter Sandman
damn farouk is scarey and creepy as hell whoo give me a errie chill!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!love this story.....
Author's Response: I like him scary and creepy. Farouk's always been the Boogey Man in the Marvel universe. Thanks for reading, Victoria.
[Report This]Date: 02-13-11 - 05:37 pm Title: Enter Sandman
Update! Yeeeessssssss!!!!
Going to read it now... sorry, I was so happy I had to say it first! :P
Author's Response: heehee! yay! Thanks for the feedback, hope you like it!
[Report This]Date: 02-13-11 - 05:32 pm Title: Watching
I've been nicely making my way through your mammoth story for inspiration to write again. It's been a great alternative to TV and you must be thanked for that!
By the way, Victor in the story? LOVE it. Hehehe
Author's Response: Sorry it's taken me so long to reply, woman. Thanks for the visit, and I'm glad you're enjoying it. "Mammoth" isn't far off the mark, this is one of my longer pieces, and it takes a lot of mental energy and Wiki references to keep me on track with this one. I love Victor, too, he's my favorite skeevy villain of all time.
[Report This]Date: 02-01-10 - 12:59 am Title: Lost
The story is wonderful, as usual. your one of my favorite authors :) the only qualm I had with the whole thing was her speech. Shes five, not two. Update soon
Author's Response: I know, I de-aged her too much, but I was running on the assumption in my imagination that if she was tossed back and forth from different foster homes back into an orphanage, she wouldn't have the chance to go to school, and how much worse would her speech be if she was learning limited English, too. But you made a point. Glad you like the story.
[Report This]Date: 09-29-08 - 09:30 pm Title: Through the Darkness Never Come, Part Two
Glad to see Rahne is getting away from that nut. It will be interesting to see her interact with Kevin.
The love scene was hot, as usual.
Great Chapter :)
Author's Response: I debated on whether or not to even have a scene. Originally I just wanted a bit of quiet dialogue between them where Logan tells her he doesn't want to play games, and asks her whether she cares about him, if she's even capable of caring about him. He's getting through to her, but even with her distant nature, physically they connect, something tangible they can both hold on to. Rahne is my favorite New Mutant. I loved bringing her into this story, which I realized was fitting since Moira is in it, too, and they are in Scotland for part of this story. Her interactions with Kevin will be interesting. But there's more trouble left to come. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 09-14-08 - 05:04 pm Title: Through the Darkness Never Come
love the word choices overall. way to put sentences together, Cee!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying to economize some of my fancy words and metaphors, I overdo them sometimes. Appreciate the review, and I'm glad you got the envelope, Taco.
[Report This]Date: 09-13-08 - 08:39 pm Title: Through the Darkness Never Come
Poor Logan was going crazy with Ororo's "subtle" teasing lol!
It seems as if Farouk won't be able to contain himself much longer.
Great update Cee I can't wait to see what's next :)
Author's Response: Yeah, Logan...poor guy. He's in for more punishment pretty soon, unfortunately, but things will eventually grow brighter, after some additional darkness. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 09-11-08 - 02:00 pm Title: Through the Darkness Never Come
I can't wait to see how things turn out in the next chapter.
Author's Response: I have no clue! Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 09-11-08 - 02:52 am Title: Through the Darkness Never Come
Have I ever told you how much I love this story? I can't wait until everyone finds out what happened.
Author's Response: Hee! I can't wait, either. Seriously, I'm wrangling with partial writer's block, sketches I want to doodle and other fandoms that keep screaming at me, to say nothing of everything going on at home, work, and my kids' schools. I'm glad you're enjoying it, Cara, and it's always wonderful to hear from you.
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