[Report This]Date: 07-30-07 - 01:47 am Title: Fearless
Ainet is a trip I like her. 'Ro did what had to be done what a tough little girl (poor thing). Logan is one scary dude. I wonder if Japheth will ever recover from his ordeal. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks. I liked the idea of a woman who was a lot like Logan and a friend of his, and it occurred to me that there was more of a story with them, since they both worked for Farouk. She was a madam, granted, but they would have crossed paths at some point and had a grudging respect for each other. As for Japheth, he ain't doin' too bad! He'll be glad you asked after him! Thanks, Burnz./
[Report This]Date: 07-15-07 - 08:42 pm Title: Possession
I really want to see where this goes next.
Your stories always has rich detail and surprises that leaves the reader wanting more.
Author's Response: Wow. That's high praise, Roxxi, thanks! Now, if only I could figure out where this is going next...
[Report This]Date: 07-10-07 - 01:07 am Title: Possession
more! more! i want more! i completely forgot about how much i love this story till i saw this update, and now i'm really excited to see where it's going to go and how it's going to develop. can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: More? I want to write more...darn writer's block! Glad you are enjoying this so far, DarkHorse. This was an odd story when I started it, and I don't have a crystal clear idea of how it will continue or end, but I'm enjoying the journey. Thanks for your review and nice words.
[Report This]Date: 07-09-07 - 03:21 am Title: Possession
Holy heck, girl! That was fantastic. The part with Logan trying to get Ororo to go with him was great.
The scene with Charles and Farouck's battle was intense. So much description that the reader feels as if it is playing out before them.
Loved the update and thanks for the shout-out.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, Libra. Glad you had the chance to peek at it and leave me feedback, which I love. I like the thought of Logan being a soft touch when the need calls for it. That skill might come in handy pretty soon.
[Report This]Date: 07-08-07 - 04:06 pm Title: Possession
Man that was a great chapter. The drama...the violence...the drama! I liked it. Little 'Ro was a trip. (I do wonder what happened to Japheth) i am glad Chuck wasn't crippled this go around. Good job!
Author's Response: Japheth is waiting in the wings; he needs rescuing, too, but I'm still debating where he will end up, since Moira is still distraught that TWO kids were taken from the orphanage. Japheth's unique. Chuck's handicap isn't the main thing here for me; his past as someone who served in the military appeals to me as much as his life as a mutant. Guy's been through a lot. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 07-08-07 - 11:26 am Title: Possession
Only one thing I can say after this chapter... What happens next???
Author's Response: A whole lot of twisting and turning. Xavier and Logan aren't gonna be let off the hook so easily, even with Ororo safe.
[Report This]Date: 07-08-07 - 08:54 am Title: Possession
Holy hot damn you write a frikkin good fic!! **squee** Your descriptions, emotions, characters and scenes are so well formed it's immediately entrancing--so much so that I felt jarred when I hit the end of the chapter. Brilliant!
Author's Response: Whee! This review just made me squeeeeeeeeeee! I'm glad you liked it. Heck, I'm glad ANYONE liked it after I let it sit for over two months before updating!!! Now that you've read my chapter, you can give me another one of yours, when your nonexistent free time allows it! Thanks for boosting my ego, Hobbins.
[Report This]Date: 06-20-07 - 06:18 pm Title: Through the Looking Glass
awesome, awesome plot. It's rare to see Moira, a great character, explored this way. I really appreciate how you keep it real -- it brings the situation very close to home, like it could've happened somewhen. I hope you don't ABANDON this story -- it's too good not to complete it. And the suspense is killing me!!
Author's Response: Love the pun! And I'm glad you like Moira in this, she is one of my favotire supporting characters to read in the old comics. Thanks for the review, I appreciate it!
[Report This]Date: 05-28-07 - 10:10 am Title: Finders, Keepers
yay! Logan is free roro
Author's Response: Yup, he's gonna free Ororo, but her adventure will have a way to go from there. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kathy.
[Report This]Date: 05-17-07 - 08:28 pm Title: Finders, Keepers
Those poor babies. I feel so bad for Ororo and Japheth. All she wants is her "dollie" and the evil Farouk provided what her heart desired. When will Logan gut that bastard and steal Ororo away? I can tell that you love writing for Victor. You do it so well.
I like that everyone's paths are finally crossing. I'm definitely intrigued.
Author's Response: Ororo will eventually find that Farouk and his ilk are evil, using what people want to control them. And yes, I adore Vic as a villain, and I tend to "humanize" him. He's another character I hear talking to me in his own voice when I imagine him. I have a Vic fic in the outline stages right now, but I don't know what to do with it. Glad you have read this so far, m'dear!
[Report This]Date: 05-16-07 - 09:21 pm Title: Finders, Keepers
It seems that 'Ro's doll is now careworn...how much time elapsed?Poor Jape, it's a wonder he didn't go back for help or try to get the orphanage on the tele. Logan and Charles, hmm, I wonder what their first meeting will be like. Good chapter!
Author's Response: Japheth didn't have the resources available when he decided to make his little trip, and no one looked out for him, which could easily be the case, since he was an orphan displaced from his family. I haven't decided much on how long it had been, likely a few months. Charles and Logan might not like each other much, but they will have a lot to talk about. Thanks for hanging out with me for this one, Burnz!
[Report This]Date: 05-16-07 - 02:55 pm Title: Finders, Keepers
Yay! An update! I'm loving this story and I really can't wait to see how this turns into a RoLo.
Author's Response: I'm still figuring that part out!!! Thanks for the review, Tiger!
[Report This]Date: 04-22-07 - 11:49 am Title: Lost
good story, yo
Author's Response: Thanks! ;-)
[Report This]Date: 04-12-07 - 11:23 pm Title: Lost
dude. you write like insane well.
Author's Response: Okay, that review rocked! Thanks! I'm grinning, since I start many of my own phrases with "dude" myself in plain conversation. Thanks for reading, Nickel.
[Report This]Date: 04-10-07 - 11:29 pm Title: Lost
*gasp* was she raped? oh no.
Author's Response: No. 'Ro is fine for the moment, she just got carried away, trying to play with the big kids for a change. She will run into a patch of trouble, but she has angels watching her in the form of Xavier and one more familiar face, soon.
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